Wikipedia:Featured article review/Kellie Loder/archive1
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.
The article was kept by Nikkimaria via FACBot (talk) 7:28, 28 November 2020 (UTC) [1].
Kellie Loder edit
- Notified: Neelix, WP Biography, WP Canada, WP Christian Music, WP Christianity, WP Women, WP Women writers, WP Women in music, talk page 2020-06-27
Per the talk page notice given by Buidhe awhile back, this 2013 promotion seems rather out-of-date. We get nothing about Loder or her career past 2013. Statements such as " In April 2013, she said that music was now her focus and that she was considering moving to Toronto in hopes of increasing her opportunities to develop her music career. She was working as a Child and Youth Worker at a company called Blue Sky at the time" obviously need a follow up. The discography mentions an album released in 2018, but it's not mentioned in the body. This suggests at least one of the songs from that album got radio attention. This also discusses a more recent song not mentioned in the article. The existing article content isn't in bad shape, but a BLP FA that doesn't include really any post-2013 information doesn't meet the comprehensiveness criteria. Hog Farm Bacon 20:00, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- I'm not familiar with this musician, but I'll do some research and update her biography so that it doesn't lose its status! Thanks, LM150 15:38, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Please keep this page posted on your progress. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 18:41, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Hold in FAR - Significant work has been done, and is still ongoing. Several of the issues have been resolved. Hog Farm Bacon 04:29, 21 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- I have updated Loder's article with her latest work. Since 2013, she has only released one album and performed music at various venues. I've updated her awards and made some copyedits throughout. Please let me know if you see areas for further improvements, thank you. LM150 21:54, 22 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Close without FARC - I've got some additional comments, mostly about prose stuff, but I think they'd be better handled at the talk page than in a FARC. Good job by LM150 at rescuing this one. Hog Farm Bacon 17:30, 25 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- With Hog Farm on board to address minor prose issues, I agree we can Close without FARC. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 17:55, 25 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- I have updated Loder's article with her latest work. Since 2013, she has only released one album and performed music at various venues. I've updated her awards and made some copyedits throughout. Please let me know if you see areas for further improvements, thank you. LM150 21:54, 22 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Closing note: This removal candidate has been kept, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please leave the {{featured article review}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Nikkimaria (talk) 17:28, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.