Wikipedia:Featured article review/Ernest Emerson/archive2
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.
The article was delisted by Nikkimaria via FACBot (talk) 5:01, 11 February 2023 (UTC) [1].
Ernest Emerson edit
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Mike Searson(retired), WikiProject Biography, WikiProject Military history, WikiProject Blades, WikiProject Martial arts, WikiProject Business, 2022-11-13
Review section edit
I am nominating this featured article for review because there is very little post-2015 information. I am also concerned that this article reads more like a promotional piece for his knives rather than a biography of this person's life. There are also many sources that are listed as citations that are not used as inline references, and an extensive "Further reading" list, which makes me believe that this article is no longer comprehensive. I am also concerned with the short length of the lede. Z1720 (talk) 23:47, 3 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Move to FARC: this article was at 2007 standards, but is not at current standards, and without Mike around, no one is likely to address the issues. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 23:58, 3 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Move to FARC: Reads too much like a promotional piece. Cinderella157 (talk) 01:00, 5 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Move to FARC - needs work, and original author is gone. Among other things, I'm not convinced that the Emerson knives in media section should even be in the article. Hog Farm Talk 14:40, 16 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Move to FARC my concerns have not been addressed yet. Z1720 (talk) 01:19, 20 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
FARC section edit
- Issues raised in the review section include neutrality, sourcing and currency. Nikkimaria (talk) 05:19, 21 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Delist - concerns raised above haven't been addressed. Hog Farm Talk 03:55, 4 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Delist concerns still present, no edits since Sept. Z1720 (talk) 15:55, 4 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Delist I removed some UNDUE content but the other issues remain. (t · c) buidhe 08:25, 5 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Delist. Only 3 edits in 2022, and one in 2023. Desertarun (talk) 19:13, 8 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Closing note: This removal candidate has been delisted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please leave the {{featured article review}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Nikkimaria (talk) 05:01, 11 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.