Wikipedia:Featured article review/Canadian Pacific Railway/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was removed by YellowAssessmentMonkey 08:35, 21 May 2009 [1].

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Canadian Pacific Railway

FAR commentary

Notified JYolkowski, WikiProject Canada, WikiProject Companies, WikiProject Trains

Promoted in 2005, this article seems to no longer meet the FA criteria. Almost the entire article lacks inline citations (failing criterion 1c). The prose is not professional, as it, for instance, contains several one-sentence paragraphs (failing criterion 1a). The roster of locomotives should be converted to a table, and there are clean-up tages in the article. There are also numerous non-compliances with the Manual of Style. Arsenikk ^(talk) 13:44, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

FARC commentary

Suggested FA criteria concern is citations, copyright. Also note the recent change to WP:WIAFA (1c) requiring "high-quality" sources.

• Delist, per FA criteria concerns. Cirt (talk) 20:10, 11 May 2009 (UTC)
• Delist, does not meet FA criteria. Arsenikk ^(talk) 20:59, 11 May 2009 (UTC)

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