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Ušće Tower edit

This article has been worked on for some time. It is about a skyscraper in the city of Belgrade. The tower has a lot of history – not something usual for a skyscraper. In the history section all the aspects of the history of this building are listed and thorougly talked through. There is also information about the future complex and the office tower. As a new tower "Ušće Tower 2" will start construction soon even more quality information will be added to this article. —Preceding unsigned comment added by LukaP (talk • contribs)

Oppose: Poor spelling, poor grammar, no references or citations, the infobox takes up nearly a quarter of the page at 1280x1024, image tags seem dubious (one of the sources given did not have the image - at least I couldn't find it), Et cetera. darkliight^[πalk] 09:06, 13 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose no references or citations, Gnangarra 14:55, 13 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose All but perhaps the first main image have rather dubious copyright status. I've tagged two really bad ones and put them up on WP:PUI. Kevin_b_er 00:57, 16 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose - No references. Dodgy English ("The foundations and the skeleton of the building was so strong..." etc). Sorry, but Featured Articles on the English-language Wikipedia really need a native English speaker to copy-edit them. Other minor points: for example the heading "Destruction" implies that the tower was destroyed by the air strikes; but actually it was only damaged and repairable. Mix of BrE and AmE ("centre" in one place, "center" in another).. should all be BrE IMHO since Serbia is in Europe, but whichever variety is used it should at least be consistent. The whole thing has good potential, but needs to be looked at carefully in its current state. EuroSong ^talk 17:08, 17 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]