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The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was promoted by Graham Beards via FACBot (talk) 20:25, 15 October 2015 [1].

SMS Prinz Adalbert (1901) edit

Nominator(s): Parsecboy (talk) 14:29, 8 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Another WWI-related article with a major centenary coming up, this being the anniversary of the ship's sinking (which was the worst loss of life for the German Navy in the Baltic). I'd like to have the article through FAC in time to run the article on the centenary. Thanks in advance to all who take the time to review the article. Parsecboy (talk) 14:29, 8 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Support

  • No DABs, external links good.
  • Images appropriately licensed.
  • Infobox issues, some of which also crop up in the main body: link boiler, indicated horsepower, knot, nmi, torpedo tubes, belt, turret, deck
    • Tell the reader what kind of engine a triple-expansion engine is.
    • Abbreviate indicated horsepower
  • Link training ship, squadron, Baltic, German Army, magazines, main battery
  • Need a hyphen between coal and fired and twin and gun.
  • More later.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:37, 10 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
    • Think I've got everything so far. Thanks, Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 11:31, 12 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • What do you men by construction number? Is that like yard number?
    • Linked.
  • young sailor Prince Adalbert of Prussia Not sure what you mean by young sailor, but do tell the reader that Adalbert was Willy's son.
    • Clarified.
  • Gunnery school or gunnery training ship?
    • Fixed.
  • German ranks need English equivalents
    • Think I've gotten them all.
  • Add |lastauthoramp=1 to your multi-author works to match the format of your notes. Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:31, 15 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Source review - spotchecks not done

  • Should use bold markup rather than semicolons for dividing the Notes section. Nikkimaria (talk) 15:17, 13 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment (having stumbled here from my FAC). References 1, 4, and 5 seem to have some template problems. Invalid |last-author-amp=1, not sure how to fix that. — Cirt (talk) 01:07, 30 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
    • Since I've been encouraging Parsec to use the ampersands, I went ahead and fixed them.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:21, 30 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support, looks better now, thank you. — Cirt (talk) 17:54, 30 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support I reviewed this article at Milhist ACR, and with the above tweaks, I believe it meets FA requirements. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (crack... thump) 11:02, 30 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Support on prose per standard disclaimer. These are my edits. - Dank (push to talk) 23:32, 1 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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