Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Paper Mario/archive1

Paper Mario

I think this is a pretty good possibility for a featured article.

I looked over the page, and I didn't see that much wrong with it at all. All of the party members and characters are listed there, without too much detail, the battle mechanics are described wonderfully, and I personally don't see any glaring errors. I edited a few names to fix their spelling, but other than that I think this is totally ready to become a featured article! This was a wonderful game to play, and I think it would be very welcome in the library of featured articles. Any way I can help make this even better if it's not ready, please do say. Toastypk 01:17, 5 November 2005 (UTC)

Object.

There is content for the plotline, but it shouldn't be in the lead, but in its own section.

It has no references.

It has no discussion on its critical acclaim, its sales figures or the Mario RPG series as a whole.

Characters section is too excessive. All NPCs should be merged into the plot section.

No mention of Princess Peach's playability. The playable characters should be unlistified, and made into a section about the partners and talk about how they work in and outside of battles.

No discussion about audio, and barely anything discussing the graphical style.

No discussion about the varying enemies, such as how a flying enemy is immune to most hammer techniques, or that spiked enemies will injure Mario or anyone who jumps on them when they attack. - A Link to the Past (talk) 04:34, 5 November 2005 (UTC)

• Kind of short - refer to Peer Review. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus ^Talk 19:10, 6 November 2005 (UTC)