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The article was promoted by Ian Rose via FACBot (talk) 23:48, 16 July 2016 [1].

Milos Raonic edit

Nominator(s): Saskoiler (talk) 18:36, 29 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

This article is about Milos Raonic, a Canadian tennis player who is currently ranked no. 11 in the world. His breakthrough was in early 2011 (when this wikipedia article first received major attention), and he's had a steady climb since then, peaking at #4 last year before injury trouble. He is a two-time major semifinalist, most recently at this year's Australian Open. The article has gone through an extensive overhaul this year (as documented here), been promoted to GA, and has gone through a peer review.

I believe this article meets the FA criteria. I look forward to any feedback you have, and I'm committed to addressing any concerns or deficiencies to the best of my ability. If this nomination is successful, this would be the first tennis player biography to be a featured article; I'm hoping to apply what I've learned during this process to improve other articles as well. -- Saskoiler (talk) 18:36, 29 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Graham Beards edit

Oppose - There are numerous unsourced facts. For a FA all statements, which are not common knowledge, require inline citations of reliable sources. Graham Beards (talk) 19:10, 29 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Could you provide some examples? I'd be happy to address any deficiencies. Saskoiler (talk) 20:01, 29 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, but please by mindful that FAC is not the place to fix such errors. These should have been attended to before nominating.
  • He received a wildcard to the qualifying tournament of the 2008 Canadian Open, but lost in the first round to Alexander Kudryavtsev. The match was his first in the ATP World Tour and his last as an amateur.
  • This marked his first singles match against a player ranked No. 1, and his first singles match against a member of the Big Four.
  • He defeated world No. 4 Andy Murray in straight sets in the quarterfinals at the Barcelona Open. This marked his first victory over a member of the Big Four. In the semifinal, he lost to world No. 6 David Ferrer. Raonic lost to Juan Mónaco in the third round of the French Open, and followed this with a second round loss to Sam Querrey at Wimbledon.
  • It marked his fourth consecutive loss in the final of an ATP 500 event.
  • Despite the loss, Raonic saw his world ranking improve to a career-high No. 6.
  • This tied previous matches between Mats Wilander and Mikael Pernfors in 1993, and between John Isner and Philipp Kohlschreiber in 2012. The five set match lasted 4 hours and 19 minutes, with Raonic losing and Nishikori advancing to the quarterfinals. In October, Raonic reached the final of the Japan Open for the third consecutive year, but lost to Nishikori again.
  • Later in the month, he reached the quarterfinals of the Australian Open after beating world No. 12 Feliciano López. He lost to Novak Djokovic in straight sets.
  • At the Indian Wells Masters, Raonic won his quarterfinal match against No. 3 Rafael Nadal, after saving three match points from Nadal in the second set tiebreak. It was Raonic's first career victory over Nadal after five defeats. He lost to Roger Federer in the semifinals.
  • Raonic lost a lopsided straight sets match to Djokovic in the final, his third consecutive loss in an ATP 1000 final.
  • The defeat marked Raonic's first singles match against Djokovic.
  • In 2014, Raonic partnered with Eugenie Bouchard to represent Canada in the Hopman Cup. Raonic won two of three singles matches, and paired with Bouchard to win two of three doubles matches. Canada finished in second place in their pool, behind top-seeded Poland.
  • They have played each other minimally, however. Raonic is 1–1 against Karlović and 0–3 against Isner. Karlović holds a 3–2 head-to-head advantage over Isner.
Graham Beards (talk) 20:23, 29 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done I've addressed all of the examples listed above as well as a few others. I had tried to get everything sourced previously (going from 68 citations a couple months ago to well over 230), but I see now that I had left some gaps. I appreciate your feedback and patience. — Saskoiler (talk) 04:06, 30 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you. I have struck my "oppose" and I look forward to reading further reviews. Graham Beards (talk) 07:00, 30 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from starship.paint edit

  • Support - all my issues have been addressed below. As a non-tennis editor, this is now is a comprehensive, well-sourced and understandable article. Great work! starship.paint ~ KO 14:02, 4 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Graham Beards: - if you want to read my extensive review below... starship.paint ~ KO 14:04, 4 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Review
Wonderful! I look forward to your feedback. Saskoiler (talk) 14:01, 16 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Early and personal life
  • Please mention his date of birth in the body; this section.
Done - Saskoiler (talk) 20:22, 20 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • His father: one source says his profession is electrical engineering, another says he has a PhD in engineering. But this doesn't mean he has a PhD in electrical engineering. Professional is not equal to studies.
Done - Added a source which confirms the PhD is electrical engineering. Saskoiler (talk) 20:22, 20 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • His mother: source says she has degrees in computer and mechanical engineering, article does not.
Done - Added this detail. After much searching, I couldn't confirm which discipline the master's degree was in, so it is left unstated. Saskoiler (talk) 20:22, 20 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • His siblings: article does not mention she is nine and he is eleven years older than him, source does. Good detailed work on his family anyway.
Done - I've added their age differences, and also their schooling. I think the family's academic background are important to show why choosing to become a professional athlete would have been a difficult decision. Saskoiler (talk) 20:22, 20 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • There are contradictions between the Ace Age article and the one by the Toronto Star. TS says he was six when introduced to tennis, AA says age seven. Just note both? "aged six or seven"
Done - Good catch. I tried to resolve the disperity, but could not. Both sources agree that his time with Curtis started in 2009, but one says start in 2007 with a two-year gap, and the other says start in 2008 with a one-year gap. I've taken your advice for "six or seven". Saskoiler (talk) 22:43, 20 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Toronto Star says he had "weekly, hour-long sessions" in 1997 at Bramalea Tennis Club after head instructor Steve Gibson recognized his potential. The move to another place was soon after this, not soon after the one week camp. This is worth mentioning.
Done - Saskoiler (talk) 22:43, 20 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Toronto Star emphasized his parents did not interfere in his coaching. Worth mentioning?
Done - Yes, I think so. It's part of their emphasis on academics. Saskoiler (talk) 22:43, 20 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Toronto Star: “Our only condition was ‘good in school,’ ” says Dusan. “Great marks.” “An honours student,” pipes in his wife. “Below that? No way.” A smart kid on and off the court, Milos kept his side of the bargain... So, how did Milos do academically, where and what did he study? There's no mention in the Wiki article. Source mentions Thornhill Elementary School. Source also says "he agreed to start taking university courses by correspondence at the University of Athabaska in Alberta."
Done - I've added elementary and high school detail here. (university is addressed later in article) Saskoiler (talk) 22:43, 20 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Lede infobox does not mention coaches Casey Curtis and Steve Gibson.
Done (Curtis) - I've added Curtis to this list. As his coach for ~9 years, he absolutely belongs. That was a glaring omission.
Not done (Gibson) - I have not added Gibson, however, for a few reasons (a) It was a very brief relationship (once a week, less than a year). (b) It wasn't one-on-one... source says "group sessions". (c) Raonic himself says that Curtis is his first coach (d) I searched hard, but could not find any other source article that even mentions Gibson. So, since it seems to be a more casual relationship mentioned by only a single source, I think it is best to limit it to one sentence in prose and skip the infobox. Any more seems to be undue weight. Saskoiler (talk) 22:43, 20 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Why use "2011 Canadian Open" instead of "2011 Rogers Cup" per the source and per that Wiki article's title? Also mention he was recovering from injury at that time of being the analyst, the source sais that.
Done (mentioned injury) Saskoiler (talk) 23:38, 20 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Re: "Canadian Open" vs "Rogers Cup" - When I began working on the article, there were all sorts of inconsistencies in references to tournaments. For example, a tournament might be referred to as "Canadian Masters" in one paragraph, as the "Rogers Cup" in a different paragraph, and then as "Canadian Open" in the performance timeline tables. But it's all the same tournament, and this is confusing. So, after scouring the Wikiproject Tennis guidelines and talk pages (where it has been discussed many, many times, with varying degrees of consensus), I opted to (a) use tournament names consistently throughout the article (and on the companion career statistics article) and (b) in general, use the non-sponsored names as these are more "stable" over time. For example, the Canadian Open has been referred by numerous names over history. In particular, for the significant tournaments (majors and ATP 1000, which includes the Canadian Open), I follow the Wikiproject Tennis guidelines for performance timelines, which is used on hundreds (or thousands?) of tennis player pages. Saskoiler (talk) 23:38, 20 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Please mention that Monte Carlo is in Monaco. Also mention that he chose to stay there because of proximity to his tennis club (good to get a name of this, it's not the Monte Carlo Country Club which is in France). “I go downstairs, get balls, and practise,” Raonic said. Source: “It’s relaxing; nobody bothers you. Nobody cares who you are.” When he travels to Barcelona for his blocks of training time with Blanco, it’s all tennis. “Monte Carlo is a place I can go, and just clear my mind. And it’s not that far — a one-hour flight.”
Done - I've located another source (video) which confirms that his tennis club is the Monte Carlo Country Club, and then cleaned up the sentence to be more relevant. (Mentioning his home club is much more relevant than other players who happen to live there.) Saskoiler (talk) 01:50, 21 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Sorry I went through this with a comb LOL. I don't edit tennis so I tried to be careful. Also could you find out why his family moved to Canada? starship.paint ~ KO 13:59, 17 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done - Saskoiler (talk) 04:03, 21 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Philanthropy
  • I'm not seeing it in the sources that he launched his foundation on 14 Nov 2012. However, it was apparently registered on 22 Feb 2012.
Done - Looks like the registration date was Feb 2012, then the first press conference some months later (couldn't find a good source, but I came across photos), and then had its first big fundraising event in November. All of these are "launching" the foundation in a way, so I just fell back on saying the foundation was launched in 2012. I also added details from the previous year when Milos sought out philanthropic advice. Saskoiler (talk) 03:44, 21 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Sources say (the star) which aims to help children needing prosthetic limbs play sports and (official foundation) In the initial stages of its work, the foundation will focus, in particular, on children with physical disabilities. and (ATPworldtour) In this stage of its work, The Milos Raonic Foundation will focus on children with physical disabilities and, especially, children in need of prosthetic devices that will enable them to reach their full potential. which I think is worth mentioning
Done - I've added to the mission statement quote. Saskoiler (talk) 03:44, 21 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • It's not in the source that the "inaugural fundraising event for the foundation—dubbed "Raonic Race for Kids"
Done - I've cleaned this up. Saskoiler (talk) 03:44, 21 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • The Race for Kids seems to be a multi-team competition with well-known captains. Not exhibition matches as "featured exhibition matches between Raonic and Andy Roddick, and between Serena Williams and Agnieszka Radwańska" seems to indicate. According to the source for the second Race, the first Race was won by the team of "the Aces". Please find out more about the first Race and reflect the nature of the Races accordingly. It's also okay to list more notable captains and their profession. starship.paint ~ KO 02:12, 19 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done - I've cleaned this up as well, by reorganizing the paragraph and identifying one additional source. In the first year, they had both a "Raonic Race for Kids" event and "Face Off" tennis exhibition matches the next night. Saskoiler (talk) 03:44, 21 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Overall a stellar effort in answering my queries so far. I hope to be able to take another look at the article on Monday or Friday. starship.paint ~ KO 10:03, 22 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Playing style
  • Unfortunately, The Tennis Island seems like a Wordpress blog. Is Jeff Donaldson a notable figure in tennis to ensure reliability?
Done - I wasn't able to find much about the author of that article to validate its reliability (although the article seems valid based on my experience). So, I replaced it with two sources - one is a video analysis showing Raonic doing the inside-out forehand (from a tennis player/coach), and the other is a mainstream newspaper which notes that he prefers the shot. Many other newspaper articles mention the shot as a strength of his, or a preference, etc. Saskoiler (talk) 23:31, 26 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Also, is Sports Mole reliable?
Done - I think the site is reliable. In this instance, the quote was accurate. However, since the key was really just a single quote from the press conference, I replaced the source with the press conference transcript. (In general, the "playing style" section is one of the hardest to provide sources for. The statements made there consistent with comments by announcers on just about any match of Raonic's, but I don't know how to source comments made during broadcasts in a verifiable way. Finding them in newspaper/online sources is harder.) Saskoiler (talk) 23:49, 26 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Rob Cherry Tennis seems like a questionable source.
In this case, the cited source is a 68-second video of footage from the 2016 Australian Open which has been annotated to demonstrate how Raonic is running around his backhand to hit an inside-out forehand. In the footer, it says "... an ITF iCoach Expert..." which links to here. That site is, according to this, an official coaching platform for the International Tennis Federation. It identifies Rob Cherry as a 20-year coach, and establishes him as an expert (i.e. someone who can analyze/recognize an inside-out forehand). I believe this is trustworthy. Saskoiler (talk) 20:02, 27 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@Saskoiler: This said he was a hothead. This alluded to poor mental strength. Any other information on this issue? starship.paint ~ KO 07:44, 29 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Re: "Mental strength" (inner thoughts) is such a subjective term, and I think different writers mean different things by it. The source you mention: "Mentally...Milos has a lot to improve. ... The step he has between himself and the top players is more mental." This source, from earlier the same year (2012) says: "The kid’s mental strength is remarkable". Or, from the 2016 Australian Open match vs Murray, this source says "There is still question marks over his mental strength", while this source uses an image caption: "Mental strength: Raonic won the third set with relative ease". I will keep searching, but I'm not sure I can write anything coherent and meaningful on the topic based on sources I've read so far.
On the other hand, the other source you mention ("a hothead") may be something to build upon. I've heard that very early in his career, he used to be demonstrably emotional on court... behavior that could be described as a hothead. For the last several years, I would say he's just the opposite, practically robot-like. So much so that when he smashed his racquet during the 2016 Australian Open SF, it was absolutely shocking. So, I think there may be something to build upon with respect to his outward display of emotions, which is less subjective than "mental strength". I'll need to search for other sources, however.
Okay, I've researched this a fair bit, the result of which is a new paragraph saying (1) at young age, he was described as hothead (2) as he got older, he was described as the opposite (analytical, stoic, robotic) (3) he ties his systematic demeanour back to his parents. I was not able to find any second opinion that mentions anything close to the "hothead" comment. Hope this works. - Saskoiler (talk) 02:28, 4 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Equipment and apparel
  • SportsProMedia says The new deal, negotiated by Raonic’s management team at CAA Sports, will also see New Balance extend its support for the Milos Raonic Foundation - worth including.
Done Saskoiler (talk) 00:01, 27 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • At first, he wore a blue fisherman's sleeve to cover a rash he had due to an allergic reaction to massage cream. This was replaced with an athletic compression sleeve, which is worn for comfort only, and often colour-coordinated with his on-court apparel. - needs references (which I think are already elsewhere in the paragraph) There was a mention of a basketballer's sleeve.
Done (inline reference) - Copied an inline reference down to cover other sleeve details.
Not Done ("basketball sleeve") - I didn't alter the language to include "basketball sleeve" in the prose. After reading at least a half dozen sources, I believe that "basketball sleeve" is just a synonym along with more general terms such as "arm sleeve", "arm compression sleeve", "compression sleeve", "athletic sleeve", and "athletic compression sleeve". In light of this, I've kept the most generic (and yet descriptive) term: athletic compression sleeve. Basketball players, football players, baseball players, etc. all wear these things on their arms. I believe "basketball sleeve" (or "shooter sleeve") may just be a marketing term to sell more in NBA shops, because it was basketball athletes who appear to have made them popular. Hope that makes sense. Saskoiler (talk) 02:38, 27 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Alright, it's fine. But I don't think the reference says that the fisherman's sleeve is blue.
Done - Removed the word 'blue'. Saskoiler (talk) 20:07, 27 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • I think you should also clarify what His other sponsorship deals are, like Aviva is insurance, etc.
Done - To be honest, my first reaction was that this was a trivial suggestion. However, once I looked at the new sentence, I see the value. It provides a more comprehensive view of the diversity of companies (not "just" companies that market to tennis players) that have find value in the Raonic brand and his marketability. So, thanks! Saskoiler (talk) 02:57, 27 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • You're welcome.
  • For his sleeve, I believe the US Open reference says that the sleeve is also worn because Raonic is used to the routine of wearing it, and his team supports it. So it's not exactly just for comfort...? My team would say it helps me. I haven't found a reason to argue that so far.” “With a guy like Milos, who is so specific on what he does every single day with his preparation, it’s just become part of his whole process,” Nunn said. ... "I'm not gonna argue when things are going OK,” [Raonic] said, smiling
Done - Tweaked the language. Saskoiler (talk) 20:15, 27 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Rivals and contemporaries
Done - Both references to Bleacher Report replaced with alternate, higher quality sources with richer analysis. Thanks for all the feedback to improve the article. Saskoiler (talk) 04:35, 27 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • A Fan Obsessed and Globalite Sports are blogs?
Done - Both sources have been removed. Saskoiler (talk) 21:09, 27 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Amateur career
  • Is it worth mentioning that Bradley Klahn is American? I don't know how tennis doubles work really, in terms of nationalities
Not done - I wouldn't oppose if you had inserted it, but I don't think it is necessary. Doubles partnerships often span nationalities (probably the majority of the time). The article doesn't specify the nationalities of too many other players. Exceptions include Pospisil (special relationship), Nishikori (notable because Raonic played him in Japan Open), and various national representation sections (Olympics, etc.) Saskoiler (talk) 18:47, 28 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Alright.
  • ten ITF Futures events, three ATP Challenger Tour events, and one ATP World Tour event - can you state that ITF Futures are third-tier events for professionals, Challenger is second-tier and World is first-tier? Would help inform unaware readers like me.
Done - Very good point. Saskoiler (talk) 17:08, 28 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Raonic had received scholarship offers from several colleges, including the University of Michigan, Princeton, and Northwestern University - I don't see this in the Ace Age source.
Done - Moved citation from later in paragraph. Saskoiler (talk) 18:47, 28 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • committed to play for the University of Virginia that fall while studying finance - I don't see this either.
Done - Moved citation from later in paragraph. Saskoiler (talk) 18:47, 28 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • While he took correspondence courses from Athabasca University - this is in the Ace Age source. Please add, and if possible, find out what course.
Done (both) - Globe and Mail article: "...he would take university finance courses online..." Saskoiler (talk) 18:47, 28 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • How did you figure out the deadline of two years for reaching the top 100 and thus referred to a ranking of 933? Is that date mentioned in the Ace Age source?
Done - The canada.com article, dated September 2, 2008 said "Yesterday, the word was that Raonic has stiffed Cavaliers head coach..." → On September 1, his ranking was 933. However, I changed the language of that sentence to be a bit more generic (since no source pins the exact date of the conversations and "deadline deal" with his parents) and just give his ranking range for that summer. I think it reads better now. Saskoiler (talk) 18:47, 28 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Okay!
2008–2010
Done - Well, actually I just changed the wording to "ITF Futures" to be consistent with the 8 other mentions of "ITF Futures" in the article. Saskoiler (talk) 17:08, 28 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Worth mentioning from How Milos Raonic served his way to the top of tennis source: Raonic was ranked around 400 in the world in late 2009 when Niemeyer took over as his coach.
Done - No 377 Saskoiler (talk) 03:38, 29 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Who coached him before Niemeyer and after Curtis? 2008-2009 seems to be unaccounted for.
Done - Found two sources mentioning Guillaume Marx as coaching Raonic while he was based at the National Training Centre. Saskoiler (talk) 03:38, 29 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • When exactly did Blanco start coaching Raonic and what was Raonic's ranking then?
Done - Saskoiler (talk) 03:38, 29 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • The referencing in the Raonic's coaching relationship evolved paragraph needs to be tighter. Stuff like because he had a young family isn't covered by the provided source. Please double-check all the claims in this paragraph...
Done - I think the paragraph is much tighter now. Saskoiler (talk) 03:38, 29 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Mention that he was knocked out in the second round of the 2010 Canadian Open after the giant-killing act.
Done Saskoiler (talk) 00:03, 29 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, he did. By approximately 5 months. (Assuming he made the deal in late August 2008, his ranking didn't enter the top 100 until January 2011.) Do you think that should be mentioned? If so, I think probably the best way to do it is to add a parenthetical note to the paragraph where the 2-year-deadline is mentioned, saying something like "(Raonic would later enter the top 100 in January 2011, missing the target deadline by approximately 5 months.)" and citing the rankings history. Yes? Saskoiler (talk) 03:58, 29 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Okay, that's acceptable! Please do that. "around 5 months", please. starship.paint ~ KO 07:39, 29 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done Saskoiler (talk) 16:18, 29 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Temporarily struck the above. Could you replace TennisEarth and Tennis Ledger with better sources? starship.paint ~ KO 13:41, 2 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done - Saskoiler (talk) 17:14, 3 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
2011
  • Last paragraph, state he injured himself at Wimbledon against Gilles Müller?
Done - Saskoiler (talk) 17:20, 3 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
2012
  • How about stating he broke into the top 20 for the first time on 2012.08.13 at #19?
Done - Saskoiler (talk) 02:28, 4 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
2013
  • Can you find a better source than Sports Interaction?
Done - Saskoiler (talk) 17:33, 3 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • State that he was ranked #10 when he was "ranked within the top 10 for the first time"?
Done - Saskoiler (talk) 17:33, 3 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
2014
  • What was the nature of the injury which caused him to pull out of the ATP Tour Finals?
Done - Saskoiler (talk) 17:44, 3 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
2015
  • Could you shift Ljubičić's picture to the bottom of this section?
Done - Well, actually I moved the Raonic picture down to preserve the left-right-left-right picture placement scheme. - Saskoiler (talk) 20:47, 3 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • How about an update of his ranking at the end of 2015? He was #14 from 2015.11.02 to 2016.01.18, the first time he fell out of the top 10.
Done - Saskoiler (talk) 20:47, 3 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • The Moya stuff should be starting the 2016 section.
Not Done (but improved) - I think it belongs at the end of 2015 for a couple of reasons. [1] The beginning of the relationship goes back to right after Ljubičić left, developed through the IPTL, and was finalized in 2015. (Raonic says "And then it was decided and sort of put together just before the new year.") [2] I think it reads better to combine this in a single "coaching/team changes" paragraph with the departure of Ljubičić (and his long-time manager). To reflect this, I've bolstered that paragraph with additional detail and sources. Okay? Saskoiler (talk) 20:47, 3 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
2016
  • Mention that he rejoined the top 10 at #10 on 2016.05.02?
Done - Saskoiler (talk) 22:04, 3 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • I believe he was recently eliminated from the French Open.
Done - And also added McEnroe hiring - Saskoiler (talk) 22:04, 3 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
National representation
  • How did Canada do in each of the Davis Cups? It is unstated for 2010, 2011, 2012, 2014, 2015.
No change I've chosen not to include any other Canadian team results in this article for a few reasons: [1] Canada's performances have been not been very noteworthy, bouncing between wins and losses each year and not "going deep". In some cases (like the victory over Israel in 2011), Raonic wasn't a key contributer (because he didn't play much or at all due to injury) and thus it's not really part of "his" story [2] The main article for Canada's performances contains this detail. Instead, I chose to focus on the noteworthy matches/years: (a) Raonic's first match, first victory, first (and only) time he played three rubbers (b) 2013, when Canada reached SF. Raonic played a major part in this performance, with 5 wins in 6 rubbers over three ties. Other player articles (e.g. Nishikori, Federer, Djokovic) tend not to list every Davis Cup performance, but rather focus on noteworthy matches or those where the player made the finals, etc. (However, Andy Murray's article is an exception in that it has tremendous detail on every year. I think this is undue weight, however.) Fair? - Saskoiler (talk) 22:32, 3 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • State that Canada's second place in the pool meant that they didn't qualify for the Hopman Cup Finals.
Done - Saskoiler (talk) 22:32, 3 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Lede
Yes, that's right. I recall thinking that the 2016 PDF URL would eventually die, so I thought linking to the "base page" (Tennis Canada publications) would be clever. Then, when it is replaced by the 2017 media guide, etc, the link would still work. However, I've now just put an archived URL there.
Ideally, I'd like to have that PDF included in the references once, and then be able to link to specific pages for different citations. (For example, the media guide is used twice now, and perhaps more in the future.) However, I don't know how to do that. Saskoiler (talk) 03:58, 29 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
I figured it out. Saskoiler (talk) 16:18, 29 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Saskoiler: Okay! See my comments above! And how about this for the lede? He has remained in the world's top 20 since breaking into it in August 2012.
Done - Saskoiler (talk) 02:28, 4 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@Starship.paint: I believe I've now addressed all of the questions raised above. Thanks for all your efforts. Saskoiler (talk) 02:28, 4 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Saskoiler: - for the Davis Cup issue, see this edit of mine. Everything else was settled well. I'm impressed at all the work you've put in, and apologize for the exhaustive review. I'm putting my Support for this comphrensive, well-sourced and understandable article. If you agree with the Davis Cup issue, I'll transfer my support to the top of the review. starship.paint ~ KO 12:49, 4 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
I like your Davis Cup edit, and wish I had thought of it myself. I appreciate all of your thoroughness. This is my first time through this process, and I've learned a great deal from your many insights. The article is better now, both in the prose and in the supporting sources. Saskoiler (talk) 13:37, 4 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Saskoiler: You're very welcome. (I put my support at the top now). I didn't know it's your first time, and actually I have just one FA myself. I'm trying for a second FA with this FAC. It hasn't received any comments yet, would you be able to comment? Thanks :) starship.paint ~ KO 14:02, 4 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Spotcheck on accuracy and paraphrasing

@Saskoiler, Ian Rose, and Mike Christie: - I did a check and there seems to be some issues here. I think the biggest issue is references not sourcing everything in a sentence, because I did notice generally a concerted effort to paraphrase for a majority of sources. starship.paint ~ KO 09:00, 4 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Starship.paint: Thank you for agreeing to take on this additional review. I appreciate it. I have addressed all of the points you've raised below. Please let me know if you have further concerns. - Saskoiler (talk) 20:50, 4 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Saskoiler: - alright, I am glad these are settled, though I also understand that more than half of the article's text was written by other users, which might have led to these errors, some of which should have been weeded out at GA. Hopefully you can do a full run-through of the article to check as mine was just a spotcheck. Additionally, I again request you check out my FAC which needs input. starship.paint ~ KO 08:39, 5 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Saskoiler, have you verified for yourself the rest of the referencing in the article is accurate and the writing free of close paraphrasing per Starship's recommendation? Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 15:12, 15 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Ian Rose: Yes. I did so last week (but forgot to explicitly mention it here). I've taken another read through today. Saskoiler (talk) 18:12, 15 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • [61] turned pro, signing on with the SFX agency - paraphrase this particular phrase
Done - Saskoiler (talk) 19:34, 4 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • [64] marking Raonic's first ever ATP World Tour doubles match - is this in the source?
Done Citation added to playing record. - Saskoiler (talk) 19:34, 4 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Raonic reached his third ATP 500 final, defeating Radek Štěpánek, Viktor Troicki, Tipsarević, - unsourced
Done Citation added to playing record. - Saskoiler (talk) 19:34, 4 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Raonic opened 2014 by reaching the third round of the Australian Open, losing to Grigor Dimitrov - unsourced
Done Citation added to playing record. - Saskoiler (talk) 19:34, 4 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • [134] tournaments, along with Federer and Ferrer - this part isn't in the source
Done Detail removed. - Saskoiler (talk) 19:34, 4 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • [161] his laid-back attitude, his positivity, - use quotation marks for exact words by Raonic
Done - Saskoiler (talk) 20:18, 4 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Raonic reached his third ATP 500 final, defeating Radek Štěpánek, Viktor Troicki, Tipsarević, - unsourced
Done - Saskoiler (talk) 20:18, 4 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • [184] Competing against Mexico in 2011, Raonic won three rubbers in a tie for the first time, beating both Manuel Sánchez and Daniel Garza in singles and partnering with Pospisil to win in doubles as well - really don't think all the info in this sentence is backed up in this one source
Done Added another reference to his Davis Cup record which was in previous paragraph. - Saskoiler (talk) 20:18, 4 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Raonic represented Canada at the London 2012 Olympics and competed in the singles competition as an unseeded player. He won his first round match over Japan's Tatsuma Ito in straight sets. - unsourced
Done Added citation to official Olympic 2012 draw. - Saskoiler (talk) 20:18, 4 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • [199] His groundstrokes are both solid and consistent - is this in the source or is it too well paraphrased because I'm not a tennis expert, see below
Done It's arguably in the source, but I've simplified to just say "His groundstrokes are both good...". ("Groundstrokes" describes any shot - whether forehand or backhand - made after the ball bounces. This distinguishes them from serves or volleys.) - Saskoiler (talk) 20:50, 4 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • chip-and-charge strategy (on returns) - see directly above
Done I've simplified the prose. The source does not use that phrase (chip and charge), but it is implied by their emphasis on volleying throughout. Two types of volleys are "serve and volley" (when one approaches net immediately after your own serve) and "chip and charge" (when one approaches the net at any other time). The "charge" means to approach the net, and the "chip" is just the shot which sets that up.
  • [243] his size and his serve, while Nishikori uses his savvy and speed - paraphrase or use quotation marks
Done - Saskoiler (talk) 20:50, 4 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • [129] set the record for latest finish ever at 2:26 a.m. - equalled the record, not set the record
Done Good catch! - Saskoiler (talk) 20:50, 4 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Fyunck edit

I added a required key for the performance chart. I added commas to the scores in the records section. Fyunck(click) (talk) 00:00, 14 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I also just ran it through the ndash checker and it fixed a couple minor errors. Overall this is is well done article per Tennis Project guidelines. It has a consistent use of of correct "world No." as opposed to "World No.". Scoring in prose (except for extraordinary feats) is correctly eliminated (as opposed to so many other articles). Photos are at their limit (we try to keep it to about 10) but they show backhand, forehand, serving, return of serve, volley... so a good variety of his particular tennis shots. I'm not sure we need a picture of a coach he had 4 coaches ago (of his total of 8 coaches). His stats look up to date, and the overall sourcing is impressive. Fyunck(click) (talk) 00:19, 14 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the edits and for the feedback, Fyunck. I've certainly tried to be consistent with other tennis biographies, while at the same time following the WP:MOS and other guidelines. As to the picture of his former coach (Ivan Ljubičić)... (a) he was the coach during the most successful period of Raonic's career so far and (b) he was the coach as recently as November, 2015. So, I don't think there is any harm in keeping it in, at least for now. I could not locate a current (free) image of any of his current three coaches ( Moya, Piatti, or McEnroe) in a coaching situation. I'll keep watch in the future, though. Saskoiler (talk) 04:46, 15 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Giants2008 edit

  • Philanthropy: I'm normally not one to recommend the addition of too many links, but I think a link for the Canadian Football Hall of Fame would be helpful in the second paragraph of the section. While I'm here, this is usually presented as "Hall of Fame" rather than "hall-of-fame", unless Canadian media does it differently than we see in the U.S.
Done (both the link and "Hall of Fame"... it is the same in Canadian media from what I can tell) - Saskoiler (talk) 05:40, 16 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Amateur career: Minor, but ref 55 should be outside the parenthesis mark, not inside.
Not Done - The current placement (inside the closing parenthesis) follows MOS:PUNCTFOOT, which says "Exceptions: ... where a footnote applies only to material within parentheses, the ref tags belong just before the closing parenthesis." - Saskoiler (talk) 05:40, 16 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • 2008–2010: "were the first singles matches for Raonic against a top 100 player and against a top 10 player, respectively." For tighter prose, remove the second "against a". They're just redundant in this context.
Done - Saskoiler (talk) 05:40, 16 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • "So, Tennis Canada arranged...". If I know my fellow reviewers as well as I think, they won't like "So" very much. Although longer, "As a result" or similar would be more formal.
Done - Saskoiler (talk) 05:40, 16 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • 2012: If we haven't explained the concept of the Big Four in men's tennis before now, we probably should here. Otherwise, a lot of readers will end up lost when they see that.
Done - Saskoiler (talk) 05:40, 16 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • As a general comment, you don't have to repeat the first names of Raonic's opponents once you include them in the first mention. I see a bunch of the first names of people like Federal and Djokovic who appear frequently.
Done (partly) - Due to the length of the article, I've tried to compromise by including the first name only on the first instance per section. So, Eugenie Bouchard is mentioned (by full name) in the Philanthropy section. Then, she is mentioned by full name again in the Hopman Cup section the first time, and then by surname after that within that section. I tried to find something about this in the MOS, but couldn't locate anything. (If I've missed something, please let me know.) I think this is a reasonable compromise now. Okay? Saskoiler (talk) 05:40, 16 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
From MOS:LASTNAME: "After the initial mention of any name, the person should generally be referred to by surname only". Giants2008 (Talk) 21:30, 16 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done - Thanks for the link. - Saskoiler (talk) 05:01, 17 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • 2015: The quote about how his foot was a preexisting issue has writing that doesn't fit well with the sentence as a whole. Consider paraphrasing this one, or add a couple of words in square brackets to make the writing better (namely "a" after "was" and "was" before "made"). Giants2008 (Talk) 21:53, 15 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done - Saskoiler (talk) 05:40, 16 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@Giants2008: Thank you for the suggestions and feedback. I've addressed all of your comments above. Please let me know if you have any further feedback for this article. - Saskoiler (talk) 05:40, 16 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • 2016: Remove "the" before "Milos Raonic Tennis", since that isn't in the quote from the source and is messing up the prose.
Done - Saskoiler (talk) 05:01, 17 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Olympics: It looks like "player" is missing in the middle of "Japanese Tatsuma Ito". Or you could just say "Japan's".
Done - As a side note, tennis commentators (and media) often use phrasing like "Japanese Tatsuma Ito" or "Swiss Roger Federer". I must have lapsed into this habit, even though I agree that style of phrasing does not belong in this article. Saskoiler (talk) 05:01, 17 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Raonic and Pospisil: Contraction should be fixed in "they've played each other in two ATP World Tour matches".
Done - Saskoiler (talk) 05:01, 17 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done - @Giants2008: Thanks again. I have addressed this set of suggestions. - Saskoiler (talk) 05:01, 17 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support – This looks like a pretty good model of what a tennis player article should look like. My main piece of advice is to make sure you control the size of the article in the future, because it has the potential to become bloated as Raonic's career progresses. However, that is merely something to consider for the future and isn't something that I would withhold support over. Best of luck with the rest of the FAC. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:28, 18 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@Giants2008: Thanks for all your constructive feedback, your FAC support, and for your kind compliment. Regarding the article size: [1] If his career ended now, I think the various sections are appropriately weighted. [2] In the future, I would expect that organic editing will probably reduce the first decade of his career with the benefit of hindsight. For example, as part of this year's editing, the earliest years of his career (2007-2010) have been trimmed by over half. Middle years (2011-2012) were cut as well. Much of the expansion (from this January 30 version) was adding more encyclopedic content to "other" sections like "early and personal life", and in significantly expanding references. - Saskoiler (talk) 22:44, 18 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Mike Christie edit

  • There's no need for the citations in the lead; it's harmless to leave them there, but personally I think they clutter the lead. Not an issue for FAC, just a comment.
I don't have a strong preference either way since all of these citations are repeated down in the body of the article. However, I was previously directed to WP:LEADCITE which says "The verifiability policy advises that material that is challenged or likely to be challenged, and direct quotations, should be supported by an inline citation. ... The presence of citations in the introduction is neither required in every article nor prohibited in any article." So, based on that, I was advised to add citations on the quotations (in the 2nd paragraph) and on the likely-to-be-challenged "best serve among his contemporaries" (in the 4th paragraph). - Saskoiler (talk) 17:23, 2 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • You might consider redlinking Danielle Knudson; she's likely to end up with an article one day.
Done. - Saskoiler (talk) 17:23, 2 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Raonic sought philanthropic advice and conceived the idea of helping disadvantaged children": I don't think you need "sought philanthropic advice", and I'd suggest something like "decided to become involved with philanthropic work, focusing on helping disadvantaged children", since the current wording makes it sound as though nobody had thought of helping disadvantaged children before him.
Done. - Saskoiler (talk) 17:23, 2 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • " (Raonic reached the top 100 in January 2011, around five months later than the target deadline.)". Why parentheses? You refer to the content of this sentence in the following sentence, so it's not really a parenthetical remark. Also, shouldn't it be "scholarships", not "scholarship", in the following sentence, since he received more than one offer?
Done (parentheses) - Saskoiler (talk) 17:23, 2 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done (scholarships). The singular "scholarship" was intentional. Since he had already chosen U of Virginia, I assume that all other scholarships had already been turned down, and so he was only turning down the U of V one at this late date. However, it reads just as well with the plural "scholarships"... meaning he turned all of them down and went pro. Plus, the plural works better with the following sentence. - Saskoiler (talk) 17:23, 2 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • "As in 2008, Raonic received a wildcard for the qualifying tournament of the 2009 Canadian Open": the "as in" construction really requires a strict parallelism, but of course he didn't receive a wildcard to the 2009 tournament in 2008. How about "In 2009, Raonic again received a wildcard for the qualifying tournament of the Canadian Open"?
Done - That's a great catch! - Saskoiler (talk) 17:23, 2 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • "After the match, Raonic commented: "I'm not in a good mood, losing pisses me off ... I've gone farther in a Slam than I have before and I've learned things even from this loss." Do we need the first half of this quote? It's colourful, but it doesn't really tell the reader anything.
Done - I originally put that in because Raonic has used that phrase on more than one occasion. But, on further consideration, I think many (most?) competitive athletes say that, so I agree that it doesn't really add anything. - Saskoiler (talk) 17:23, 2 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • "you just put too much pressure on our shoulder": presumably a typo for "your shoulder"? Since it's inside a quote I didn't want to fix it without checking.
Done (just a typo) - Saskoiler (talk) 17:23, 2 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • 'Some consider Raonic's serve to be among the best of all time. Sampras, Raonic's childhood idol, said that "[Raonic's] serve is bigger than big."': suggest combining these two short sentences; perhaps 'Some consider Raonic's serve to be among the best of all time, with Sampras, Raonic's childhood idol, describing his serve as "bigger than big."
Done - Saskoiler (talk) 17:23, 2 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Do we need all those attributed quotes describing him as stoic? Surely we can just say he is widely described that way, and leave the details to the citations?
Done I've cut all but one of the quotes, which I think is necessary as a counter-balance to the "hothead" quote. I think there's better flow now. - Saskoiler (talk) 17:23, 2 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • You have "quickness and mobility" twice in two sentences; I'd suggest changing the second instance to "movement".
Done - Saskoiler (talk) 17:23, 2 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The sleeve has drawn attention from female tennis players Williams, Victoria Azarenka, and Caroline Wozniacki." This is rather vague. Have they criticized it? Commented on it? Complimented him on it? Unless there's something specific to say about their comments, I think this could be cut.
    I see you fixed this, but you need to say which Williams sister this is -- it's not clear from context. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 16:42, 2 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done - I've added the "super cool and different" quote (by Williams), and removed mention of Azarenka and Wozniacki. I think keeping it in helps to underline why the sleeve attracted attention from fans and commentators too. (I've added "Serena" to make it clear now) - Saskoiler (talk) 17:23, 2 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Raonic and Pospisil have been the two top-ranked Canadian men in year-end rankings": suggest qualifying this statement with the years for which it has been true.
Done (Well, I didn't change anything. The sentence already begins with ""Between 2011 and 2015") - Saskoiler (talk) 17:23, 2 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • I can see that being runner up three times running at the Japan Open is noteworthy in Raonic's career, but is it really worth noting in the "Records" section of the article? We wouldn't note if he'd been to the quarter finals of a tournament for five straight years, although that might be a unique event too.
Done I was influenced too heavily by several other player articles (e.g. Federer, Djokovic, Wawrinka) that mention finals, semifinals, and even quarterfinals. However, after reconsidering, it's not significant enough to warrant mention in the "Records" section, particularly because Stefan Edberg reached 5 consecutive Japan Open finals, winning 4 of them. - Saskoiler (talk) 17:23, 2 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

-- These are all fairly minor points, and I expect to support once they're taken care of. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 13:20, 2 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Mike Christie: Thanks for your feedback. You've got a keen eye to pick up on some very subtle copyedit items. I have addressed all of your comments above, and I think this has improved the article, particularly with a few very "surgical" deletions of a few words/phrases/sentences. Please let me know if you have any additional comments. - Saskoiler (talk) 17:23, 2 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Support. Everything looks good now. This is a solid article. (And thank you for the compliment!) Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 18:41, 2 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Coord notes -- Hi Saskoiler, would this be your first FAC nom? If so, a belated welcome to the process! It looks like we still need the following checks:

  • Image licensing review
  • Source formatting (I can see that Starhip.paint went into source reliability)
  • Spotcheck of sources for accurate use and avoidance of close paraphrasing (unless Starship.paint has done this to and will sign off)

Let's wait for confirmation from Starship.paint either way on the spotcheck question, and perhaps Mike could look at source formatting, but for the image review you can post a request at the top of WT:FAC. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 00:04, 3 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Ian Rose: Yes, this is my first FAC nomination. Lots of work, but I've learned a great deal going through the process. I have put the image review request in as suggested. Should I contact Starship.paint and/or Mike Christie, or have you done so already? Let me know if there is anything else I should be doing. - Saskoiler (talk) 02:15, 3 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Well I pinged them above, so let's just hang loose for now. Tks/cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 02:28, 3 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Ian, I'll give it a shot, though I haven't done a source formatting review before, mainly because I think I have a poor eye for catching that sort of error. If Starship.paint hasn't done a spotcheck I'll be happy to do that too. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 11:34, 3 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • I did some checking earlier in my review, but I will do another spotcheck in the next 24 hours hopefully. starship.paint ~ KO 13:41, 3 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@Ian Rose: Thanks to the kind assistance of Starship.paint (scroll way up), Mike_Christie (below), and GermanJoe (below), the three checks you requested have been completed. Let me know if you require any further action. - Saskoiler (talk) 03:29, 12 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Source formatting.

  • Some refs have the source date in parentheses, some with no parentheses. They should be consistent; it doesn't matter which you pick.
This difference results when some citations have an author (which then displays with parentheses, e.g. Smith, Mary (January 1, 2010). "Article title...". Retrieved July 4, 2016.) and some citations do not have an author (which then displays without parentheses, e.g. "Article title..." January 1, 2010. Retrieved July 4, 2016). This formatting difference comes straight from the various cite templates. - Saskoiler (talk) 19:03, 4 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref 255 has no retrieval date.
References 8 and 255 in the Footnotes section both refer to the "Tennis Canada..." entry in the Sources section, which does have a retrieval date (May 28, 2016). (The PDF is very long, and this was done so that individual references can carry page numbers, while keeping just a single entry for the source itself.) - Saskoiler (talk) 19:03, 4 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Some refs have no source date, and that's OK if it's a website that doesn't give you the date the page was published. I found one case (ref 174) where there is a publication date given; please check that others with no given source date to see if one can be added.
Done - I fixed 174 and a couple others with date problems. I also added the Template:Use mdy dates to help ensure consistency going forward. - Saskoiler (talk) 19:03, 4 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

-- Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 11:40, 3 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Mike Christie: Thank you for agreeing to take on this one additional review. Much appreciated. I have addressed your feedback above. Let me know if you have any further concerns. - Saskoiler (talk) 19:03, 4 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
I'm surprised to find that cite web changes the date format in that way, but since it's all within a single cite template I don't think I can complain. I see you added the retrieval date for 174; your answer on the others is fine. Ian, I'm not really a source formatting expert, but Saskoiler is correct that the behaviour I noticed is generated within cite web, and is not due to inconsistent citation template usage. I think that's OK but I wanted to be sure you were aware of it. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 01:51, 5 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Image check - all OK edit

  • All images are CC-licensed and have sufficient source and author information - OK.
  • Flickr images show no signs of problems, and have EXIF and/or credible authorship claim - OK.
  • I have removed the lead image's caption. The city information doesn't really add context here, as this is a photo that could have been taken anywhere. And the name itself is redundant in a lead section. But feel free to revert if you disagree, it's a minor point either way. GermanJoe (talk) 15:15, 11 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@GermanJoe: Thanks for taking the time to complete the image check. I appreciate it. I don't think the caption was needed on the infobox image either. - Saskoiler (talk) 03:25, 12 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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