Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Leonard W. Murray/archive1
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The article was archived by Hog Farm via FACBot (talk) 13 February 2023 [1].
Leonard W. Murray edit
- Nominator(s): Friendofleonard (talk) 03:30, 13 February 2023 (UTC)
This article is about a significant Canadian military figure, the only Canadian to command a theatre of war in WW1 or WW2. Admiral Murray was C-in-C North Atlantic, and widely regarded as the architect of the convoy system during the key years of the Battle of the Atlantic. There is a linked date - the FA could be published on 8 May 2023, the anniversary of the Battle of the Atlantic. Friendofleonard (talk) 03:30, 13 February 2023 (UTC)
- I’m going to drop in a procedural oppose on this (for the moment, at least), as you opened a PR an hour ago, and you should only have one process open. A quick glance suggests you should withdraw this and keep the PR open. The lead is too short and there are a few MOS breaches I can see from a quick glance, which the PR should sort before it is returned here. - SchroCat (talk) 03:58, 13 February 2023 (UTC)
- I concur - suggest withdrawal for the moment, let the PR run instead. Nikkimaria (talk) 04:00, 13 February 2023 (UTC)
Archiving per above, let this finish it's peer review before FAC. Hog Farm Talk 04:37, 13 February 2023 (UTC)
- Closing note: This candidate has been archived, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FAC/ar, and leave the {{featured article candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Hog Farm Talk 04:37, 13 February 2023 (UTC)
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