Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Jon Huntsman, Jr./archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was not promoted by GrahamColm 11:09, 27 October 2012 [1].

Jon Huntsman, Jr. edit

Featured article candidates/Jon Huntsman, Jr./archive1

Nominator(s): Grammarxxx ^{(What'd I do this time?)} 04:45, 16 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured article because I have put a lot of work into this article and it meets all criteria. The article is about the former Governor of Utah and US Ambassador to Singapore and China, and most recently a 2012 candidate for Republican nominee for President. Grammarxxx ^{(What'd I do this time?)} 04:45, 16 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Suggest a more enticing nom. So who is he anyway? Obviously he's notable or he wouldn't have an article. Johnbod (talk) 13:13, 16 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Done Grammarxxx ^{(What'd I do this time?)} 18:07, 16 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Source review - spotchecks not done

Source for 2006 Cato Institute eval? Added
Source for "largest budget in the state's history"? Added
Source for children? Added
Source for Distinguished Eagle Scout Award? Check for other material missing citations Added
In citations, be consistent in what is wikilinked when, what is italicized when, etc
Web sources should consistently include publishers
FN4: who uploaded this image?
What makes this a high-quality reliable source? Replaced
Be consistent in when you include access dates
Be consistent in whether you include locations for newspapers
FN18 and similar: formatting
Fn21: formatting
Several titles use hyphens when they should use endashes
FN41: formatting

Oppose and stopping - citations/sourcing needs significant work before review can proceed. Nikkimaria (talk) 15:42, 17 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comment by Jesse V.

I noticed that this article has some deadlinks and other redirect issues. Please see its Checklinks entry. • Jesse V.^(talk) 00:36, 21 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comment about 15 duplicated links, the first of which occurs in the second para of the lead Jimfbleak - talk to me? 09:57, 27 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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