Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/India national football team at the Asian Games/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was archived by Gog the Mild via FACBot (talk) 13 January 2024 [1].

India national football team at the Asian Games

Nominator(s): Drat8sub (talk) 15:21, 13 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The article is about history of India national football team at the Asian Games. It is a well researched article, having detailed facts and stats backed with reliable citations. Comprehensive with needed structure and images and is consistent with citations. During DYK nom, I was asked for copyedit. Thus the article was copyedited with the help of GOCE, following which I thought of nominating it for Featured status, my first FA nom and proud to nominate since being a volunteer here for so many years now. Hope the reviewers here will help it to get it promoted. Welcome to all feedbacks. Thank you. Drat8sub (talk) 15:21, 13 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose, suggest withdrawal and to go through the GA process first. While the prose quality has drastically improved since I first saw it at the DYK nomination, it is clearly still below FA standard. There are still basic grammatical/spelling errors ("The Asian Games Federation (AGF) organizing the games from the first edition in New Delhi until 1978", "when a result is not produced", "defeating Bangladesh 3–0 victory", to say nothing of poor sentence organisation etc. A large proportion of the article is also sourced to sportskeeda.com, which per WP:SPORTSKEEDA is "generally unreliable". Again, I think seeing how the article does at WP:GAN would be beneficial. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 16:39, 13 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sadly I think that AirshipJungleman29 is correct. I am archiving this in the hope that it is improved and brought back. As well as a run at GAN, can I recommend a copy edit via GoCER, a period at PR and perhaps consideration of involving a FAC mentor. Gog the Mild (talk) 19:50, 13 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Closing note: This candidate has been archived, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FAC/ar, and leave the {{featured article candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Gog the Mild (talk) 19:50, 13 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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