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Big Sur edit

Self-Nom: I admit that this is a self-nomination, but I've done quite a bit of work over the past months to raise the quality of this article on Big Sur. It's now a succinct and complete account of the area, with a sufficient level of detail to encourage further research, but not so much as to overwhelm the casual reader.

Object- no inline citations. The Trivia section should be before the external links. There are a couple of spots of weak prose, for example "The coastal side of a ridge can be cool and foggy, while on the inland side a few hundred feet away, temperatures will hit 100 degrees." AndyZ 01:59, 24 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Object. No footnotes, plus whole thing seems a bit thin. Could there be a section on natural history and geology of the region, say? Daniel Case 02:38, 24 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]