Too long. Needs cleanup work. RJFJR 13:06, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
First thing to do is make a list of what needs to be done:
- References need to be removed from headers
- Headers need to be reworded to appear less technical
- There needs to be less headers
- An image would help
- Perhaps an Italian, German and/or Portuguese speaker could translate the foreign versions? Computerjoe's talk 14:29, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
References are now removed from the headers. — Preceding unsigned comment added by RJFJR (talk • contribs)
Going quite well so far, however, I believe it is still too technical and I still do not like the headings. Computerjoe's talk 19:01, 10 September 2006 (UTC)
I've been working on it so I Added to User:RJFJR/Desk RJFJR 14:36, 11 September 2006 (UTC)
Much better. Computerjoe's talk 12:32, 1 November 2006 (UTC)
Closed. RJFJR 17:06, 2 November 2006 (UTC)