Wikipedia:Article assessment/1980s comedy films/Monty Python's Life of Brian

Assessment Article assessment
1980s comedy films
Assessment completed
6 March 2006
12 March 2006
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Assessment of an article under the topic 1980s comedy films.


Article: Monty Python's Life of Brian

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Review by violet/riga

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  • Coverage and factuality: 6
Good coverage of the impact of the film, but it could do with more filming details; poor referencing
  • Writing style: 8
Some informal language, but generally of a high quality
  • Structure: 7
The lead is too short and needs to better summarise the film, but the structure is good
  • Aesthetics: 8
A screencap would greatly improve the article
  • Overall: 7

A good article in many respects, but does not go into enough detail about the filming and release (location, takings etc.) and needs better referencing. violet/riga (t) 20:36, 6 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Review by DMurphy

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  • Coverage and factuality: 6
Sketchy referencing with no standard format. Good analysis but the synopsis needs an expansion. Too much about the impact of the film and too little about the film itself.
  • Writing style: 5
Far too many parentheticals; the lead seems very awkwardly written. Good vocabulary but far too unencyclopaedic; if the parentheticals were removed, the article would be about half as long.
  • Structure: 6
Needs a longer lead; the section on Analysis falls the way of covering the Controversy of the film a little too much; the Blasphemy Allegations section should be renamed Controversy.
  • Aesthetics: 8

I agree with violet here, a shot from the film would be beneficial.

  • Overall: 6

Needs a re-write desperately before anything else is added, then the holes in the article can be addressed. -DMurphy 22:47, 8 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

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