Tekhelet revision edit

Hello, I noticed your recent edit to Tekhelet. Well done for adding so much new information, it was a real improvement to the page. I noticed some parts of the edit don't quite fit the tone of Wikipedia, and I'd like to update it a bit with your help to make sure I'm not changing something you'd rather I didn't. Thanks for your contributions!DirkJandeGeer (talk) 10:11, 8 November 2021 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for reaching out before making any changes. I would love for you to fix the tone if you think it can be written in a better way. Please just let me know what you are changing so I can make sure the information is still accurately portrayed. Zackdu (talk) 14:30, 8 November 2021 (UTC)DirkJandeGeerReply