Yellow Flannel
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:09, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
Article Feedback edit
I like that there are many pictures and helpful graphs within the article. The broken up sections in the article are done well. The sections are clear and explain the issues that are present in Hong Kong. I think the introduction could be developed more since the article is overall long, yet the introduction is only a couple of sentences. I think background information on the country itself would help bring all of the other elements come together. In the article I am editing, our introduction was also underdeveloped. I included a table with demographics of my country which makes it easier for the reader to read! The lead does not contain or introduce the rest of the article well, since a lot of information is missing in the lead. I think the structure flows well. Maofukada (talk) 00:51, 20 November 2019 (UTC)