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/ƒETCHCOMMS/ 18:05, 23 November 2010 (UTC)Reply

Regarding this article, here are some suggestions on improving it. It's a little messy right now:

  • More references are needed. Ideally, every non-obvious (i.e. "the earth is round") fact should be backed up by an independent reliable source. Examples of reliable sources are news articles, books, magazines, and academic journals—the key is trustworthy (no blogs or Facebook, etc.) and independent (not affiliated with CRRSP).
  • Write more neutral, and encyclopedia-like. Don't use "your", etc.

/ƒETCHCOMMS/ 18:10, 23 November 2010 (UTC)Reply