User talk:Work permit/sandbox/World Domination

This is a proposal for new article in the English language wikipedia. It starts as a google translation of the german wikipedia article Weltherrschaft. Please limit edits to teaking the english and finding reliable, thrid party english sources. All references must include the term "world domination". Discussion here should be limited to specific edits and specific sources. Please discuss general issues about the validity of this article at Talk:World_domination. Please, no lengthy discussions. Again, this is a sandbox, not a main article. The purpose is to identify reliable sources for a "straw man" translation of the german article.--Work permit (talk) 04:54, 25 October 2009 (UTC)

It seems rather similar to the old English translation... Did it have any refs? - ʄɭoʏɗiaɲ ^τ _¢ 06:39, 25 October 2009 (UTC)

It's somewhat similar, but perhaps w/o all the wp:or. Google does a reasonable job of getting the meaning across, but the English is a bit rough. It would be helpful if someone who know german could tweak the language. You can take a look at the ref's in the Weltherrschaft article; they are all German references; we'd prefer English language ones for the English language Wikipedia.— Preceding unsigned comment added by [[User:{{{1}}}|{{{1}}}]] ([[User talk:{{{1}}}|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/{{{1}}}|contribs]])

Though in a pinch we can make use of the German ones. I'd recommend just reading this, then pulling up a blank sheet and rewriting it based on what you just read. The language is far too rough to work with as it stands. - ʄɭoʏɗiaɲ ^τ _¢ 18:28, 13 November 2009 (UTC)