Wendyyoo

Hi Wendy! I thought you had a really good structure to your sandbox draft article so far! Each section makes sense to be broken off onto its own, and is laid out in a way that makes sense. The content throughout reads very academic and without leaning towards any particular way. The use of images in the draft are perfect so far. I would add more sources maybe with more academic ties? I would also say to add some more citations, either other wikipedia articles or sources. It’s really well done so far! -Nikole Ballen — Preceding unsigned comment added by Koledragoo (talk • contribs) 05:39, 5 November 2021 (UTC)

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