Watchenthusiast

June 2014

The page you tried to create looked very much like a promotional page for a business. I don't know whether that was your intention, but Wikipedia is not a medium for promotion, and you need to be careful to make sure that it doesn't seem as though you are trying to use Wikipedia as an advertising service. The editor who uses the pseudonym "JamesBWatson" (talk) 19:52, 5 June 2014 (UTC)

The page was written as unbiased as possible. What information makes it appear promotional? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Watchenthusiast (talk • contribs) 20:04, 5 June 2014‎

There is nothing blatantly promotional about it, which is why I said "I don't know whether that was your intention", but the "press" section looks rather like an attempt to list things that show the business in a good light, and tell us that the business does good things. I can't point to anything there that really reads as spam, but there's a general promotional tone to that section. I see far worse posted numerous times every day, and I don't want to overstate the case, but I do see that section as looking rather promotional. The editor who uses the pseudonym "JamesBWatson" (talk) 20:14, 5 June 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Draft:Raymond Lee Jewelers (June 5)

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TheQ Editor (Talk) 21:20, 5 June 2014 (UTC)

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Your submission at AfC Raymond Lee Jewelers was accepted

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Zach Vega (talk to me) 16:23, 8 June 2014 (UTC)