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Latest comment: 7 years ago by Pv186 in topic Edit suggestions

As someone from North Carolina, I have particular interest in the political climate in the state. So, there is a case concerning And Tango Makes Three that took place in Charlotte in 2006. This is the case I will elaborate on in my contributions to the page. Additionally, I plan to change the page to give more information on the authors. I want to address their purpose in writing the book, as well as, what they have said regarding the controversies which surround the book.

Vlp5 (talk) 03:11, 14 November 2016 (UTC)vlp5Reply

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In the linked google doc below, I included my edits in red. I think both sections are well done but could use a tiny more here and there (which I indicate).

https://docs.google.com/a/georgetown.edu/document/d/1rlRsP2lYyR4pMDStmpDwA1paFJwNJQ-4EoeO0Ne5NVE/edit?usp=sharing

Allisonsemands (talk) 18:36, 21 November 2016 (UTC)AllisonsemandsReply

I have added my comments on this Google Doc https://docs.google.com/a/georgetown.edu/document/d/1pRYd8FX-WaxfwMRN7INQzt0Dkzt6Rq2TX1_HnL5E-5o/edit?usp=sharing

Pv186 (talk) 20:44, 22 November 2016 (UTC)Pranay Vadapally (Pv186)Reply

Pv186 (talk) 20:45, 22 November 2016 (UTC)Pranay Vadapally (Pv186)Reply