Tushar858

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Canyon View Elementary School

Nice job on the Canyon View article, although I think that the programs shouldn't sound like they are directly copied(against Wikipedia rules). We need more description The Phoenix Enforcer(talk) 05:28, 18 January 2010 (UTC)

I fixed the programs. For the GATE section, I know it sounds like I copied it directly from the website but I actually wrote that. I might be able to get a picture of the school. Also, the article is quite short right now. I'll try to get the "fight song" on there. Tushar858 17:48, 18 January 2010 (UTC)

Canyon View has a fight song? The Phoenix Enforcer(talk) 18:33, 18 January 2010 (UTC)

The thing about the article is that it sounds to much like its from a brochure(promote high level thinkers???). The Phoenix Enforcer(talk) 03:02, 19 January 2010 (UTC)

Some of the GATE programs seem to sound like advertisement. Pzoxicuvybtnrm 19:27, 19 January 2010 (UTC)

I know they sound like advertisements. Can one of you (The Phoenix Enforcer or Pzoxicuvybtnrm) help change it so it doesn't sound like an advertisement/brochure? Tushar858 05:33, 20 January 2010 (UTC)

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