User talk:Tomflon006/Cramique

Latest comment: 8 years ago by TugceAk in topic Review

Review

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Hello!

I think you should change belgium with Belgian in the first sentence "Belgian brioche bread", and if you do not want to mean North of Luxembourg as well, I think adding "in" before Luxembourg would sound better. And at the end, there is a typo, you wrote wich instead of which. Other than these, it is very clear and accurate I think :) TugceAk (talk) 14:28, 13 April 2016 (UTC)Reply