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Your submission at Articles for creation: Bene Meat Technologies (November 8) edit

Latest comment: 6 months ago3 comments2 people in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Vanderwaalforces was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just brief mentions about the subject or routine announcements)
reliable
secondary
strictly independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet all four of these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Vanderwaalforces (talk) 08:02, 8 November 2023 (UTC)Reply

Can I ask which sources were not acceptable? I tried to look for as many as I could, they seem to me they are in-depth because they focus on the Bene Meat Technologies. Reliability: they are not in english and not scientific journals but in Czech Republic they are acknowledged as good journals. Secondary: from what I could find they were written by journalist who were not involved before with this company. Strictly independent: there were no implications that journalists or journals were connected with Bene Meat Technologies and they are not only praising company.

I am sorry if this seems offensive, it is not supposed to be like that I just could not find what sources did not meet the criteria listed above. But if some or all are not good from your point of view, could you implicate which sources I should change Tomatom123 (talk) 08:28, 8 November 2023 (UTC)Reply

Hello, Tomatom123! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Vanderwaalforces (talk) 08:02, 8 November 2023 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Bene Meat Technologies (November 10) edit

Latest comment: 6 months ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Qcne was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The sources are better, but I still have issues with the written tone. Stuff like "on an industrial scale at a consumer-friendly price. It consists of an international team of young and experienced scientists based in Prague. It cooperates closely with renowned scientific institutions" is just an advert masquerading as an article.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Qcne (talk) 09:02, 10 November 2023 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Bene Meat Technologies has been accepted edit

Latest comment: 6 months ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Bene Meat Technologies, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. Most new articles start out as Stub-Class or Start-Class and then attain higher grades as they develop over time. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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Thanks again, and happy editing!

Qcne (talk) 12:39, 10 November 2023 (UTC)Reply

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