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Your submission at Articles for creation: Matthew P. Mayo (March 1)

Latest comment: 6 years ago2 comments1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MadeYourReadThis was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This person might meet notability guidelines but promotional sounding language such as "prestigious award" and "popular trio of coffee-table books" needs to be toned down. Stick to the facts, let them speak for themselves. This reads like it was written by a public relations firm representing this author.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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MadeYourReadThis (talk) 14:11, 1 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

Hello, Tng1007! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! MadeYourReadThis (talk) 14:11, 1 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Matthew P. Mayo has been accepted

Latest comment: 6 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Matthew P. Mayo, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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SkyGazer 512 ^{What will you say? / What did I do?} 17:30, 10 May 2018 (UTC)Reply

Help me!

Latest comment: 2 years ago2 comments2 people in discussion

This help request has been answered. If you need more help, you can ask another question on your talk page, contact the responding user(s) directly on their user talk page, or consider visiting the Teahouse.

Please help me with... Hi! I have made major edits and updates to this page Matthew P. Mayo to reflect a neutral point of view. Would it be possible to have help with removing the template message that appears at the top? Or please let me know what else I can do to facilitate this request? Many thanks in advance for any help! Tng1007 (talk) 01:42, 4 February 2022 (UTC) Tng1007 (talk) 01:42, 4 February 2022 (UTC)Reply

Probably you need to clarify whether you are or are not connected with Mayo. Since the biographical content of the article seems to be entirely without sources, there are more important things to worry about than that tag.

One small suggestion: figure out a way to write lists without using 'as well as'. — jmcgnh^{(talk) (contribs)} 06:53, 4 February 2022 (UTC)Reply

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