[Poughkeepsie Journal 1]== Proposed deletion of Trenten Beram ==

Hello, Thenygman. I wanted to let you know that I’m proposing an article that you started, Trenten Beram, for deletion because it's a biography of a living person that lacks references. If you don't want Trenten Beram to be deleted, please add a reference to the article.

If you don't understand this message, you can leave a note on my talk page.

Thanks, Cotton2 (talk) 03:39, 11 August 2016 (UTC)Reply

Hi. I'm not sure if I cited my reference correctly, however, I included the name of the online newspaper as well as the Link to the information provided in my summary DIRECTLY in the artlicle. Please tell me if I'm doing something wrong??

Proposed deletion of Trenten Beram

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Hello, Thenygman. I wanted to let you know that I’m proposing an article that you started, Trenten Beram, for deletion because it's a biography of a living person that lacks references. If you don't want Trenten Beram to be deleted, please add a reference to the article.

If you don't understand this message, you can leave a note on my talk page.

Thanks, Cotton2 (talk) 03:39, 11 August 2016 (UTC)Reply


OK. I RESUBMITTED the Summary Article for TRENTEN BERAM with 3 revisions: - I cited the Newspaper article for Trenten Beram's Filipino National 200 meter record. - I cited the website for Trenten Beram's 400 meter American Conference Championship win. - I Deleted the final lines stating Trenten Beram's aspirations of making the 2017 SEA Games & 2020 Japan Olympics with his Filipino National teammates. You can DELETE THE OLD ARTICLE and view my recently submitted Article with revisions. Thank you! Thenygman https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Trenten_beram Thenygman (talk) 16:09, 13 August 2016 (UTC)Reply

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16:03, 11 August 2016 (UTC)

Hi. I'm not sure if I cited my reference correctly, however, I included the name of the online newspaper as well as the Link to the information provided in my summary DIRECTLY in the artlicle. Please tell me if I'm doing something wrong??

http://www.poughkeepsiejournal.com/story/sports/high-school/2016/07/06/arlington-grad-beram-fastest-philippines/86722860/

Hi Thenygman, I would like to suggest that you start over on your article, Trenten Beram. Then click here, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Article_wizard, to get help starting a new article. If you want to do this, just post again here, below this text saying so and I will tag your post for immediate deletion per editor's request. I think that would give you the best chance at developing the quality article you want. Also please sign your posts with four tildes (~~~~) so we know it's you. Thanks and good luck, Cotton2 (talk) 18:41, 12 August 2016 (UTC)Reply

Hi! I removed the last paragraph of Trenten Beram summary (his aspirations) as well as correctly "Cited" the credible reference for his National Record. Please let me know if we're good?? Thenygman


Speedy deletion nomination of File:Pron.wav

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Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. Although everyone is welcome to contribute to Wikipedia, introducing inappropriate pages, such as File:Pron.wav, is not in accordance with our policies. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. Under section G3 of the criteria for speedy deletion, the page has been nominated for deletion.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be removed without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. ~Oshwah~(talk) (contribs) 01:27, 12 August 2016 (UTC)Reply

Recreation of Trenten

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Hello,

I am here to advice you on how to make articles. Since your first article about Trenten was deleted as it contained no references, you created another article citing only one source and it's being proposed for deletion. At this point, it would be best if you just started at Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation. It would be best if you just created an article, have it reviewed, improve the draft if it's declined, etc. As of now, your article will be deleted again and again if you just keep recreating the same article with the same content and sources with nothing improved. Callmemirela 🍁 {Talk} 15:53, 13 August 2016 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Trenten beram (August 13)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Gbawden was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Gbawden (talk) 17:59, 13 August 2016 (UTC)Reply

Nomination of Trenten Beram for deletion

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A discussion is taking place as to whether the article Trenten Beram is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.

The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Trenten Beram until a consensus is reached, and anyone is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.

Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article. Callmemirela 🍁 {Talk} 03:26, 14 August 2016 (UTC)Reply

Your draft article, Draft:Trenten beram

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Hello, Thenygman. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Trenten beram".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}} or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. 1989 04:07, 22 May 2017 (UTC)Reply

Friendly advice

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You are putting a lot of effort into this article. It strikes me that it might be your autobiography. No one care more about an autobiography than its subject. In Wikipedia land, though, not one is less qualified to write a biography than the subject. Philip Roth, the writer, was blocked from correcting an error in the article about him.

Second, the article passed the first review, but that doesn't mean it will last. Beram is quite an athlete, but not a professional. It might turn out that Beram is not quite notable enough to merit an article. It might get smacked down, completely out of your control. Don't worry, Beram is young. I am sure that eventually there will be enough honors to deserve an article.

Keep up the effort. Rhadow (talk) 22:41, 2 September 2017 (UTC)Reply


I am a Filipino admirer. Only wish I had the skills of this young man. I appreciate the acknowledgment of the effort I have put into my article. I also believe that Mr. Beram is well deserving of a page.

His accomplishments not only include 2 GOLD medals in an international event and 2 National Record Breaking marks for our country. But also a feat which has not been seen in over 3 decades - Winning a 200 meter and 400 meter sprint in the same international venue (Michael Johnson). Having scanned Wikipedia for track and field athletes for some time, I have seen hundreds of subjects who have earned a page with far less impressive accomplishments.

I hope you will reconsider.

Thenygman
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