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- Hi! My name is Bri and I am a junior studying Communication. It is nice to meet you! Brierbach (talk) 20:54, 15 January 2021 (UTC)
Hello! I'm Angel and I just did a peer review of your article "Jeshua Anderson"! Let me know if there's anything that is unclear to you. Here's the link to the review https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Thekevanator/Hydro_Flask/Jiyenita_Peer_Review Jiyenita (talk) 04:49, 28 January 2021 (UTC)
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Your article evaluation edit
Greetings @Thekevanator:, I saw your article evaluation on the talk page of Hydro Flask. You did a good job talking about how thorough the article was and what was missing. That said I think there were some aspects of the article that you could have additionally addressed, namely:
- Did any of external links in the article not work?
- Did the article have a neutral point of view and include diverse perspectives?
- Is the content up to date?
- Did the lead do a good job defining the topic and presenting a concise overview of the article?
- Is the content up to date?
I also have some concerns about the choice of this article for your project. First, I think that articles on brands often run into trouble with neutrality and not being promotional. It's important to make sure that you have good reliable sources to draw on when adding information to the article and that you'll have enough material to draw on. You suggested adding numerical information about the rise of the brand as well as the design award, but I'm worried that this might not amount to more than a couple sentences. So I strongly suggest that you get a head start on finding sources. If you can't find any it might be a good idea to switch to a different article. When you think you've found a new source you can share it with me and I'll try to help you decide if it's a good source. The choice of whether to stick with this article for the project or to choose a new one is totally up to you, but if you have a hard time finding sources it will make completing the project difficult. It's not too late to choose a different article if you think that a different article might be easier. Please don't hesitate to reach out to me, either here on Wikipedia or on Discord and I can help you make the decision. Groceryheist (talk) 08:13, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
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