User talk:Tenabroc/sandbox

Draft Article Review

The draft article is very well laid out with a clear flow and easy to understand headers. The content is well sourced. The writing style is excellent with clear language that doesn't require the reader to be an expert in the field to understand. Outstanding! One area that could be expanded upon would be to add content on fractography with images of how brittle fracture looks under and SEM versus a ductile fracture etc. Mike Moore

Thanks Mike! Good suggestion, I'll work on that. Tenabroc (talk) 00:41, 20 November 2017 (UTC)