TayloratML
Joined 2 November 2023
Latest comment: 28 days ago by Explicit in topic Your draft article, Draft:Michel A. Khalaf
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- Hi, @Greenman! Thank you so much for the quick response. I have started a new thread on the associated Talk Page for the draft. I am unsure how to respond to your comment directly in the draft, so I hope the Talk Page was the correct place instead.
- In the event that you cannot find it, here is a copy of my response:
- Thanks for leaving your comment on my draft submission. We used this Chief Executive article as the source for the birth year mentioned in the info box. We did this by using the age mentioned in the article (55 years old), viewing the publish date of the article in the meta data (2019), and subtracting from there.
- We have searched public records for additional third-party sourcing to confirm this information beyond knowledge as a COI representative from MetLife, but we are happy to look further if preferred.
- Thank you again and we look forward to hearing from you soon. TayloratML (talk) 17:16, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
Your submission at Articles for creation: Michel A. Khalaf (November 6)
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- Hello @WikiOriginal-9! Thank you for reviewing the Michel A. Khalaf article draft! I saw that you said the draft was close to approval, but not quite there. Can you please provide some guidance on what would get the draft across the finish line for approval?
- To give context from my point of view, Michel A. Khalaf is a Fortune 100 CEO frequently mentioned in the news. Here are some other reputable publications that mention him that I didn’t use as sources. Would any of the following help supplement the article?
- https://finance.yahoo.com/news/metlife-ceo-michel-khalaf-cfo-201500162.html
- https://www.foxbusiness.com/business-leaders/metlife-names-khalaf-ceo-kandarian-to-retire
- https://finance.yahoo.com/news/metlife-announces-leadership-changes-cio-130000055.html
- https://www.bloomberg.com/news/articles/2023-08-02/metlife-profits-dip-as-company-prepares-for-reinsurance-deal?embedded-checkout=true
- https://www.thehindubusinessline.com/money-and-banking/india-among-the-most-attractive-secular-growth-markets-for-metlife-visiting-global-ceo-michel-khalaf/article66386457.ece
- https://finance.yahoo.com/news/metlife-foundation-reaches-milestone-over-153000819.html
- https://www.wsj.com/market-data/quotes/MET/company-people/executive-profile/55457484
- https://www.bloomberg.com/profile/person/17474621#xj4y7vxkg
- https://finance.yahoo.com/news/metlife-inc-nyse-met-q3-174128314.html
- https://www.thinkadvisor.com/2021/11/05/metlife-has-paid-2-1b-in-u-s-covid-19-death-claims/
- https://www.reuters.com/business/finance/metlife-profit-drops-lower-adjusted-premiums-2023-05-03/
- Thank you for any clarification you can provide me. I look forward to hearing back from you! TayloratML (talk) 21:01, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
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Hello, TayloratML!
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editI took a look at all of the sources listed above and unfortunately they do not contribute much more to his notability. Most of the sources are just passing mentions. We need more independent sources discussing him in depth. The interviews are okay but don't grant that much towards notability because interviews are not considered fully indepedent. However, I have re-sumbitted the article for a second opinion. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 21:08, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
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Your draft article, Draft:Michel A. Khalaf
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Hello, TayloratML. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, "Michel A. Khalaf".
In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.
Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. ✗plicit 00:05, 25 May 2024 (UTC)