User talk:TaylorSchroeder/sandbox
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Linzyjane13
Hi Taylor,
It looks like you have a really strong start on your section of the Wikipedia article. I think you may need to add in some more citations (even if they come from the same source) specifically in sentences that you cite specific statistics. As far as content goes, I think you did a great job objectively explaining the history of the Ba'ath party. At the end of your first paragraph, though, you talk about other groups that are illegal and have a hard time advancing women's rights and I think it would be useful to expand upon that thought.
Great start!