User talk:Tanmanjf/sandbox

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Michelev in topic Feedback on 2nd draft

Feedback on 2nd draft

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  • Remove internal link from Lifeboat Davit types heading. Since there are no other types listed, I suggest keeping heading as is, just Types.
  • A few coding errors for inline references.
  • One or more of the labeled photos could be embedded in the article near the text that refers to parts.
  • Some of the technical terms further down in the article would benefit from an internal link.


Michelev (talk) 21:39, 15 April 2014 (UTC)Reply