Tanha Mahmud

HMB 436 Project --Tanha Mahmud (talk) 03:13, 28 September 2013 (UTC)

Welcome

Hi Tanha, I'm Andrew and I'm a Ph.D student in environmental science at UTSC. Feel free to contact me if you have any questions. OhanaUnited^{Talk page} 19:35, 28 September 2013 (UTC)

Peer Review

Hey, the content seems good so far especially the "Description" and "Related fungi" sections. In "Ecology", I don't think you need to put citation right after "buildings" in the sentence. You can just cite everything at the end after "hospitals". Also the sentence beneath it, needs some editing. I didn't get your point regarding the cases and suppressed immune system of HTSC recipient. For related fungi section, put all the names of strains in "italics" whether abbreviated or not. Where you talk about Aspergillus Baeticus and A. pseudoustus, and their low temperature growth condition testing, cite the article from which you got the experiment and maybe add a sentence about the setting in which this test was performed. Lastly, work on structure and spelling on some of your sentence for e.g. in the "description" section 3rd line, you could maybe write it like this: "But when observed under the microscope, they possess elongated conidial heads with bent Hülle which distinguish it from other related species of Aspergillus."

I hope this helps, Good luck! :) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Naz7 (talk • contribs) 22:19, 1 November 2013 (UTC)