TLedits

Norfolk article edits

Hello TLedits. I am responding here to the message you left on my talk page. I am sorry that you felt discouraged in your first attempts to edit Wikipedia, and I am happy to work with you to see if we can improve the article. I assume you are referring to the edits about the Chrysler Museum?--Mojo Hand (talk) 13:13, 18 July 2018 (UTC)

hi Mojo Hand, Thanks for your reply. I greatly appreciate your help with this. Yes the edit had to do with the Chrysler Museum on the Norfolk Virginia page. Thanks, TLedits

The information about the Chrysler was pretty interesting. The two concerns I had were: (1) the promotional tone and (2) the source of the information. The tone is pretty easy to adjust; do you recall the source for the information? It would be good to be able to cite the source for the numbers etc.--Mojo Hand (talk) 18:06, 18 July 2018 (UTC)

Thanks! The number of galleries, number of library volumes, and number of public buildings came from the Chrysler website - http://www.chrysler.org/ The number of works of art came from the Wikipedia entry for the Chrysler.

Thanks for the info. I haven't forgotten about you - just a bit busy in real life. I will take another look at the Norfolk article later today or tomorrow.--Mojo Hand (talk) 13:29, 20 July 2018 (UTC)

Great! Thanks.

Looks like another editor already much of the content that you do. The section looks generally OK to me now. What do you think?--Mojo Hand (talk) 15:49, 21 July 2018 (UTC)

Mojo Hand, Yes, looks good! Thanks for getting it on track! Appreciate your work, and for taking time to help me learn more about editing. Best regards, TLedits