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Your submission at Articles for creation: Convenience store saet-byul (May 8)

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Theroadislong (talk) 20:32, 8 May 2020 (UTC)

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May 2020

Hello, I'm Thanoscar21. I noticed that you added or changed content in an article, Backstreet Rookie, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so. You can have a look at the tutorial on citing sources. If you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Thanoscar21 (talk) 16:31, 22 May 2020 (UTC)

Synopsis Backstreet Rookie

Hello, Sushjs! I just added the synopsis but you replaced "three years" with "four years". If there is a source that states so, may I know the link? Because from the official backstreet rookie website through SBS site, in introduction page of Jung Saet-byul character, it was said to be three years (3년), not four years. Here is the link https://m.programs.sbs.co.kr/drama/backstreetrookie/cast/64537#0_1 Thank you Yoojbyul (talk) 03:11, 23 May 2020 (UTC)

First of all i have seen what you wrote exactly on asianwiki so that’s counted as a copy paste and if you check out this link https://toptoon.com/comic/ep_list/conveni_re you will see 4 years Sushjs (talk) 03:40, 23 May 2020 (UTC)

Also i hope that you don’t change anything by copypasting it will be removed Sushjs (talk) 03:43, 23 May 2020 (UTC)

I admit that the previous synopsis actually copy paste from Asianwiki. So, I tried to fix that by visiting the official website of Backstreet Rookie via SBS, reading Hangul and translating it manually. By the way, the link that you attach is a webtoon link and there is clearly a difference story between webtoon and drama. So, at least visit the official website and translate it to know the development of the storyline. On SBS Backstreet Rookie official website, in the introduction page of Jung Saet-byul, it was written that "그 뒤로 3 년 의 이 이 이 물 물 물 살 된 된 은 대현 한다 한다" which means Saet-byul met Dae-hyun after three years. So, correct me if i am wrong. If the link doesn't match, it can be edited by only changing the citation. On introduction's page of Saet-byul and Dae-hyun, you deleted it and say that it must be a copy of Asianwiki. Can you explain which part Asianwiki describes characters like that? I took that information from Jung Saet-byul introduction page, said "소녀들의 구룡성채라 불리는 발광여고에 다니던 샛별의 바람은" which means she got titled as "Guryeongsongchae" (구룡성채) and it mention "고교시절 지역구를 평정한 이력이 있다" means she ruled a local district in her high school life. I also cross-checked with the translation of maknaecloud (if you are a fan of Kim Yoojung, you definitely know who she is) and it's not much different. I also previously asked permission to enter some information from her and she allowed it. Yoojbyul (talk) 05:20, 23 May 2020 (UTC)

Explanation of Dae-hyun's character. On the second paragraph (of Dae-hyun's character) https://programs.sbs.co.kr/drama/backstreetrookie/cast/64537 says that "밀어 붙이는 뚝심 과 잔머리 안 굴리는 우직함, 종종 다른 사람 의 처지 너무 몰입 해 손해 를 보는 순수 하고 따뜻한 마음 의 소유자." which I have added to the article but now it has been deleted. You can translate to know what it means.

On the infobox, I added webtoon's writer based on http://www.breaknews.com/sub_read.html?uid=465209&section=sc3 informed that it was written by two peple and in Namuwiki it said the webtoon was first published on 2016. So, what's wrong with that? For the producer, I know it from maknaecloud. It's okay if you don't want to include it because there is no official news Yoojbyul (talk) 05:21, 23 May 2020 (UTC)

All of my format edits (such the time aired) is inspired by "Love in the moonlight" article. So, I try to make it clear with input time first aired in paraghraph. I know I made a mistake by copy and paste from another article (just for synopsis, because I ever made a draft https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Draft:Backstreet_Rookie&redirect=no and it's not an imitate of Asianwiki except the synopsis), and if until now everything I've edited is printed as an imitation of Asianwiki, that's okay, but give me an explanation of which character I copied from Asianwiki? At least, try visit the official website and translate it manually so that this article can be more informative with a little additional character information. Thank you Yoojbyul (talk) 05:23, 23 May 2020 (UTC)

I have checked your draft and you literally delted everything i wrote and have put what you have wrote also there was a lot of mistakes and you depend on one link only and you put it every single time

Sushjs (talk) 05:57, 23 May 2020 (UTC)

And for the characters description no need for unnecessary information it’s supposed to be simple not an article Sushjs (talk) 05:58, 23 May 2020 (UTC)

It was simple and clear if you are a real yoo jung fan don’t ruin this Sushjs (talk) 06:00, 23 May 2020 (UTC)

I'm so sorry, maybe I'm too greedy to make this page more informative, but if you read it again, what you write is already wrapped up in my edits. You're saying to make it simple because it's not an article? But this page is an article, so I just wanna make more detailed explanation because basic information such as name, role and age can be found on other fanpages or SNS. Even in the article "Crash landing on you" character description is longer than I made, because this is an article. It should be informative and provide information that other people do not know about in other articles or social media. Yoojbyul (talk) 06:41, 23 May 2020 (UTC)

You also said that I have wrote and there were a lot of mistakes, depend on one link only and put it every single time, can you explain a lot of my mistakes? I put one link only because I explained one by one the characters based on the official SBS-Backstreet rookie website which placed 1 page for 1 character. So, I use that page as a link and there is no other link as accurate as Backstreet Rookie's official website. Have you even checked the official website and translated the source? Sorry if I've ruined what you have done. I won't try to edit this page again if you don't even allow it, but please check the official website so that what you write doesn't make other people misunderstand, including for basic information like "Daehyun and Saetbyul meet again after 4 years". Even SBS write it as 3년 and maknaecloud translates it to "3 years" not 4 years. Thank you Yoojbyul (talk) 06:42, 23 May 2020 (UTC)

Please understand what I’m saying before writing i said that the characters description is not an article!

Sushjs (talk) 06:54, 23 May 2020 (UTC)

And if you read the crash landing on you characters description and didn’t just look at how long it is they have written different stuff not just writing without understanding Sushjs (talk) 06:57, 23 May 2020 (UTC)

And if you are flawless why didn’t you just make the article i have put so much work on it and i don’t want it to be ruined we are both yoo jung’s fan so don’t make any troubles anymore Sushjs (talk) 06:58, 23 May 2020 (UTC)

Also congratulations for knowing how to use Google translate and translating 3 years but let me tell you something i don’t use it i understand it and i write it on my own Sushjs (talk) 06:59, 23 May 2020 (UTC)

Lol i have discovered something funny that you even wrote the producer of love in the moonlight before Sushjs (talk) 07:06, 23 May 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Convenience store saet-byul (July 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Chris troutman was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Chris Troutman (talk) 21:27, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Convenience store saet-byul

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 00:38, 4 January 2021 (UTC)