Karna Edits edit

Hi. I noticed you made some edits to the Karna page. While I have no issues with most of them (one you removed easily sourced material, so I put it back in), two of your edits introduced broken english into the article.

The articles relating to Hinduism and Hindu mythology, over time, have accumulated a lot of this junk English. Edits from non-English users, as well as insertion of material directly from translated sources (if you've ever read a translation of the Mahabharat to English, you will know what I mean!) have caused this. When you insert junk like that and don't fix it, you have encumbered a future editor to fix your mistake. When making edits, please be sure to check your grammar and spelling, especially when you are making very small edits. For example, you changed "a tremendous task" to "a impossible task". The correct version is "an impossible task. Elsewhere, you added this bit: "But in real Karna was equal to 2 Maharatha". The correct version (and you should add a reference), is "in reality, Karna was equal to two Maharathis". Poor English and structure reflects negatively on the article. Judging by your username, you wouldn't want to do that to Karna, would you? :) Pinkfloyd11 (talk) 20:50, 26 August 2015 (UTC)Reply