SunCamper

Feedback on Draft:Cliff Tait

Hi. I have renamed Draft:Cliff Tait, as you expressed a wish for, and which I agree with. I have also done some clean-up of the article to Wikipedia format. Something that remains to be done is to remove the external links in the main body of the article. Generally they can be converted into references, which is something you may know how to do, as you did make several refs. Cheers. Nurg (talk) 10:13, 8 September 2023 (UTC)

Hey thanks! I'm really new, this is my first new article, so any help is hugely appreciated! I really don't know what I'm doing yet! SunCamper (talk) 00:36, 29 September 2023 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Cliff Tait has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Cliff Tait. Thanks! -- NotCharizard ^🗨 13:25, 17 September 2023 (UTC)

Hey thanks so much for your feedback. I wrote the text after reading the published books and articles, but I'm not sure how to cite them when the documents are printed and not online? I couldn't believe that this guy didn't have a mention in Wikipedia after all his feats and records. SunCamper (talk) 00:42, 29 September 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Cliff Tait (November 1)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Turnagra was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Turnagra (talk) 18:36, 1 November 2023 (UTC)

Hello, SunCamper! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Turnagra (talk) 18:36, 1 November 2023 (UTC)

Hey Turnagra, this bloke is in the Museums in New Zealand, he is a hero over there and the information is all accessible through their museums. I'm just a newby here, can anyone help to get a page up for him? it's all real, the information is well known in his books and museum and news clips, and in the oral history at the museum, I don't know what else I can do. Some of the sections are from his book and oral history, but I can't post links to that as far as I know because the books are out of print but held in the museum. Can someone help or tidy this up or remove what needs to be removed so he has some sort of acknowledgement? It's unfathomable that the person to fly the smallest aircraft around the world at the time doesn't even have a mention. SunCamper (talk) 02:37, 5 December 2023 (UTC)