Suhib almasmoom

Hey Suhib! First off I really like your topic and you did a great job on your draft. A few things that I think need to be improved on are citing your pictures, expand on the rift development section, and work on your original image. Let me expand on those suggestions: As far as the citations go, I think you did a good job! I would make sure that you have a citation for each of your images and also some of your sentences that aren't common knowledge. I know those can be easy to miss. I would expand the topic on the rift development by adding more details and providing more "links" back to other wiki pages. The last suggestion is the original image. I'm impressed that you drew it yourself and I like the procession of each step. I would recommend making it look a little more professional by trying to use adobe illustrator or even microsoft word/power point to try to draw it out. I know this is a rough draft, but also double check punctuation, capitalization, and sentence structure--I would be happy to help proofread it for you after you have made your final edits. Just let me know if you need help and great job! Eblamble (talk) 13:58, 6 March 2014 (UTC)Erica Allen — Preceding unsigned comment added by Eblamble (talk • contribs) 00:09, 6 March 2014 (UTC)

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hello Suhib almasmoom,

I am one of your online ambassadors. I am around to help you out with editing Wikipedia, You can contact me by email or on my talk page. Since I'm in Australia my timezone is quite different to yours. I have no tertiary qualification in astronomy or geology, but I like the topic, and I am hoping that you can write so that I can understand it! Graeme Bartlett (talk) 20:43, 5 March 2014 (UTC)

Hi, the secret to your problem is an unclosed ref tag <ref name="two">. This appears just before the missing heading. Since you want to make use of the reference a second time you should add a / on the end like this: <ref name="two"/>. See if you can fix this up. (what happened is that it ate all the content up till the next closing ref tag.Graeme Bartlett (talk) 03:59, 1 April 2014 (UTC)