User talk:Steffihelene/sandbox
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Bradhoot in topic Comentarios segundo borrador
Comentarios segundo borrador edit
¡Buen trabajo, Steffi! Por supuesto, quedan unos asuntos por arreglar aún, así que aquí van mis comentarios, en orden según su lugar en el texto.
Introducción edit
- influenced by Rioplatense Spanish (correct?) <-- yes
- of which they share common characteristics <-- Sugiero que lo reescribas para que fluya mejor.
- *not sure what to link for 2, 3, and 4* <-- Wikipedia should create the index for you based on the headings in your article, so don't worry about it for the moment.
Main Characteristics edit
- identical to the River Plate <-- stick with one name for this dialect, either Rioplatense or River Plate. Also, in English I'd say "identical to Rioplatense Spanish", without the article and with the language name.
- the substitution of the personal pronouns lo and la for le in the position <-- In English this reads backwards. Leísmo es cuando alguien utiliza le en contextos de complemento directo (=direct object) en lugar de los pronombres lo y la.
- More leisurely = slower? with more pauses?
- inherited from Guaraní, slang = Guarani, Lunfardo, and other... <-- Lunfardo es un nombre propio.
- postalveolar deaf affricate = postalveolar voiceless affricate
- Assimilation of the "r" = Assibilation
- The final word /n/ = Word-final /n/
- Non-Aspirated realization of /x/ = Non-aspirated realization of /x/.
- Conservation of the hiatus. (?) = Hiatus (linguistics) conservation
- Hard and flexible vocalism. <-- No estoy del todo seguro qué quiere decir el autor original aquí, pero puede ser algo como "Stable vowel system"
- Weak articulation of /b/, /d/, and /g/ in intervocalic position (including initial). = Weak articulation of /b/, /d/, and /g/ in intervocalic position (and even initial position).
Similarities with... edit
- creating a variety(?) of northeastern Argentina (maybe instead of variety...wide range? "creating a wide range of northeastern Argentinian...) very similar to the Paraguayan Spanish in the provinces already mentioned. <-- 'Variety' is fine here. Yo diría: "...the respective dialects fuse, creating a northeastern Argentine variety very similar to Paraguayan Spanish...".
- "Voseo is the oldest form of Castilian Spanish" (direct quote from another Wikipedia page). <-- No estoy seguro cuál es la mejor manera de citar esta otra página de Wikipedia, pero seguramente es algo que podemos averiguar.