Ssapplet
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Hello, Ssapplet, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:03, 25 June 2018 (UTC)
Notes edit
Your work looks great so far! My only note is to be careful to avoid persuasive language like you're leading the reader to a specific point. It's not bad and mostly it's little things like "thus" - this is something that can be resolved by just attributing the work such as "according to So-and-so... thus....". Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:15, 16 July 2018 (UTC)