Snarkyr2unit91
Okay so, I read through your article and made some grammatical changes here and there. I added an internal link for trash-talking and added the hyphen where it was missing. I didn't make any major changes because your article looks really good and I think it'll be great when it's all done. The fact that "teabagging" is a form of non-verbal gesture in a video game is absolutely hilarious to me. If you need/want any more help or anything just let me know! Jcidado (talk) 22:56, 18 April 2012 (UTC)
Hey dude. So I'm just gonna leave my peer review/comments here. Here goes. So far you're doing a good job with keeping that neutral Wikipedia tone. What other topics/sub-topics are you going to discuss? Is what you have so far your entire introduction or are you going to add to it? Are you going to talk about any games specifically? Social interactions sound interesting - are you going to talk about the influence in young children/teenagers when it comes to violent video games? That will be a cool topic to delve into from a non-biased standpoint, because the stuff out there is usually written by someone who is either for or against it. What other social interactions are you considering? Chalbeis (talk) 23:46, 30 March 2012 (UTC)
Hi Ricky. This is Catherine (Cat). You are not in class today. Forget to set an alarm? Also I listened to a song by the artist you suggested. I looked on YouTube because my computer wouldn't let me open the link you sent me. Very catchy. What other music do you like? See you on Monday! (Chalbeis (talk) 14:18, 3 February 2012 (UTC)
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I don't see your topics listed on your userpage, am I missing something? Debaser42 (talk) 18:50, 7 February 2012 (UTC)
http://penny-arcade.com/report/editorial-article/sexual-harassment-as-ethical-imperative-the-ugly-side-of-fighting-games — Preceding unsigned comment added by Pdebarro (talk • contribs) 13:33, 12 March 2012 (UTC)
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I changed the title of your article to Social_interaction_and_first-person_shooters (deleted the S at the end of "interactions") to reflect proper grammar when dealing with "social interaction" (as it is already plural in this case). However, I do not see much work here, only an introduction (a history of FPS that you can get elsewhere). I suggest adding to your article, and including the research that you have done. Quickly. Debaser42 (talk) 15:21, 28 March 2012 (UTC)
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Hey Ricky, just letting you know that I'm moving my article back to sandbox at some point really soon, so you can edit it there (link on my user page). :) Chalbeis (talk) 13:44, 23 April 2012 (UTC)
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