Smallgoose26
Joined 13 September 2018
Latest comment: 5 years ago by TA3301 in topic Yin Mingzhu
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:56, 14 September 2018 (UTC)
Yin Mingzhu edit
Minor Revisions Needed
- The restructured filmography section is very good
- Is your lead section an edit or an addition to the existing lead section on the existing article?
- There is repeat information in the draft that already exists in the article.
- Restructure the Biography section to be more of a cohesive paragraph rather than point form
- Restructure the Career section to be more cohesive paragraphs