Skananth

Classmate notes from @catkil

• Overall, the article looks really good! Would like to commedn both of you on your work.
• Second and third sentences in the lead could be clarified/condensed.
• Under causes, sections involving prosocial and antisocial behavior should either be broken out into sections or should develop a parallel structure. Current order is difficult to read.
• Groupthink doesn't have anything under that section.
• Real-world examples: WWII should have more details in line with the other examples.
• Work Place should not be a part of the Real-World examples, it should get its own section (since it is not a specific historical example like the other, but an example of an application/theory)
• Group size header doesn't have any information under it.
• Let me know if you have any questions about my notes

Catkil (talk) 23:58, 28 November 2017 (UTC)