User talk:Sjensen3/sandbox

General comments

Hello, Sjensen!

I'm an online ambassador for your WMST 250: Women, Art, and Culture (2014 Q3) class and have just stopped by to provide a quick review and add what I hope will be helpful comments.

You've got a great start to your article about Anne Mozley, particularly by developing a great list of sources for the article. I've got a couple of comments to help make this ready to be an article and to complete your assignment.

• Regarding sections for the article, you may want to look at User:Apdame/sandbox for basic sections including the introduction or lede, which has a summary of the article and occurs before any of the sections. Another example, just to get a feel for encyclopedic tone and the type of content is Anne Moncure Crane.
• It would be great to see more specific information about: what she's written and any education or influences she may have had.

I made a couple of minor edits as examples of encyclopedic tone, use of wikilinks, and addition of specific details. By the way, I couldn't find an image of Anne Mozley easily, either, but you may be able to add an image of one of her books, like this or this under PD-simple.

I'll check in on you again, and I'll be watching this page if you have any questions or comments.--CaroleHenson (talk) 03:23, 31 October 2014 (UTC)