Hello, I'm Typhoon, your wiki mentor. I would like to clarify some of your drafts;
1. Wikipedia content should be informative,which means that there would be no teaching method and your drafts on improving the content seems reasonable, which you have to cite your references from where you get the listed information.
2. You have to type at least 5 sentences or more in the real wiki "Moisturizer" page with correct references. (I can help you with this if you don't know how to cite)
3. If you have any question please feel free to ask me in this talk page:)
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