Peer Review: Looks good so far but what it probably needs are more art examples. Something that distinguishes her artwork among other Wasco descents. Probably little more on her perspectives on art in general and more detail on what motivates her as an artist overall. Being in touch with her roots is a good motivation but a little vague, if there were other aspects that played a role in her life that made become a significant member of the Wasco descent community then it would help identify her better and distinguish her goals slightly better as well. Maybe find other museums that are responsible for carrying her work and or more detailed biography but other than that good work overall just needs more details on some aspects and other characteristics about her such as goals. Some questions about her were clarified but could definitely help to provide more answers that other readers might have further down the line.