Rvcvettobe

Recent edit to Hock burns

Hello, and thank you for your recent contribution. I appreciate the effort you made for our project, but unfortunately I had to undo your edit because I believe the article was better before you made that change. Feel free to contact me directly if you have any questions. Thank you! —Sadat (Masssly)❤T☮C☺M☯ 18:09, 12 May 2014 (UTC)

Hi Masssly, thanks for letting me know, but it was there to aid other veterinary students in their learning, regarding confusion over vocabulary (this did occur). I removed no material, only added that Hock burn and Sore hocks can easily be confused. As there are no wikipedia pages distinguishing the 2 diseases or describing sore hocks I believe the information needs to be available. It will help fellow vet students and pet owners. Maybe you could help me improve the article, by adding the information in a way you are happy with? We could word it better or make it incorporated into the article better. Or maybe there is a better place to describe sore hocks in rabbits that can be linked to from the hock burn page (as in "see also" or "note" sections)?

Simply saying you thought it was better before is also not terribly helpful, please be more specific next time so I can improve any edits.

Thanks, Rvcvettobe (talk) 22:00, 16 May 2014 (UTC)

Thank you Rvcvettobe for taking the time to contact me and I am sorry if my notice wasn't put too well but I can assure you that my revert was done in good faith. First of all I am glad you have mentioned "wording". Inclusions are expected to be part of the main body of the article unless they're coming under a new section header. And the use of the word "Note" in this regard isn't so encyclopedia. Even so and most importantly you did not provide citations for your inclusion. So please reconstruct your sentence to flow with the existing text in the article whiles supporting your claim with reliable source/s. Please have a look here on how to provide citations. Fell free to contact me again for further discussion. I wish you all the best and happy editing. —Sadat (Masssly)❤Talk☮C☺Email☯ 23:10, 16 May 2014 (UTC)