Re:Itouch edit

It looks a bit better now, but it still sounds a little like an ad (I've copyedited it a little to make it more like other wikipedia articles). I wasn't sure when i first saw the page, which is why I put a prod notice on it rather than deleting it straight away as spam. For some infom on how to avoid that with a new article, check Wikipedia:Spam#How_not_to_be_a_spammer. Welcome to Wikipedia, BTW - I hope you enjoy it here! Grutness...wha? 02:22, 16 August 2008 (UTC)Reply