User talk:Rossdanielbarrie/sandbox
Latest comment: 5 years ago by RubenGer in topic Ruben's peer review
Peer Review edit
Starts off great. Uses clear and relevant statistics. Could improve by citing sources as you go. Clearly relates to your topic and country. Bwiffen1234 (talk) 22:03, 18 October 2018 (UTC)
Ruben's peer review edit
- Really good structure, as good as a paragraph from an advanced editor
- Every point is structured out well but not too detailed
- Due to numbers and neutral way of writing really informal
- Sources are all reliable
Overall good work, keep it going like this! — Preceding unsigned comment added by RubenGer (talk • contribs) 23:12, 18 October 2018 (UTC)