Rockandrollin85

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mark Younger-Smith (June 2)

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Star Mississippi 14:49, 2 June 2022 (UTC)

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Hello Star. I've done some editing and removed unreliable sources. Although, in my understanding I thought that Youtube could be used as a source as long as it was from the direct person's account, not a random user.

In addition, I did look at the info for a notable composer and Mark's work has had the following requirements:

~An Album on several countries music charts

~Has multiple platinum records- gold or higher

~On a major record label

~Is reasonably prominent

~Wrote and performed a song on a major motion picture

I'm trying to see if I can locate something to cite his gold records. Is there anything else you could suggest? Rockandrollin85 (talk) 17:21, 14 July 2022 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Mark Younger-Smith has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Mark Younger-Smith. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 20:34, 3 July 2022 (UTC)

Thank you. If I remove the sources you mentioned will the article get approved? Rockandrollin85 (talk) 23:29, 6 July 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mark Younger-Smith (August 1)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Akevsharma was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Akevsharma (talk) 12:58, 1 August 2022 (UTC)

What about as a composer? I looked at the info for a notable composer and Mark's work has met the following requirements:

~An Album on several countries music charts

~Has multiple platinum records- gold or higher

~On a major record label

~Is reasonably prominent

~Wrote and performed a song on a major motion picture Rockandrollin85 (talk) 00:20, 3 August 2022 (UTC)