User talk:Riklonc02/sandbox

Hi Collis, in reading what you have so far in your sandbox, I noticed a few grammatical errors interspersed (like the use of "an" where "a" should be), and in the section where you mentioned population growth for the second time, I think that you could omit that phrase, and instead say that the "demand has increased..." Be careful to make sure your tenses align in your sentences as well, as I saw a sentence that may have had a mismatched phrase. I think you chose an interesting topic, and am wondering if you are going to be adding what you have onto a pre-existing page, or will it be new? It seems like it would be exist already, but I have not checked. Also, you might want to take advantage of the direct Wikipedia linking with the governmental organizations you mentioned in the subsection you created. Overall, you're doing great, and I look forward to hearing about your topic some more!Phiafornature (talk) 17:49, 3 May 2018 (UTC)