User talk:Richiewayne/Shear Thickening Fluids (Dilatants)

You are off to a good start. Concentrate now on finding data in secondary sources; a table showing viscosity at different shear rates for a variety of materials would be great. Figures such as a schematic showing how STF work and chemical structures would be great too. Hagen76 (talk) 23:04, 7 May 2011 (UTC)

Draft Review

Required Element	Not Present	Present-Needs Much Work	Present-Acceptable
Introductory paragraph		should be summary of entire article accessible to someone who has taken thermodynamics, but little else
At least three sections in the main body		yes, but need extensive text addition
At least three original figures		need one more original
At least one original data table	x
At least two properly formatted mathematical equations	x
At least 4 in-text links to other Wikipedia articles			x
At least 8 references in your endnotes		need several more (4 and 5 are a single ref

Hagen76 (talk) 02:46, 31 May 2011 (UTC)